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Nosliw
NosliwLv149mth
2024-02-14 05:01

I'll simply say that it's a worthwhile book that'll push you to finish reading it in one sitting 😊This is a love story with a lot of interesting twist and turns. If you a looking for a light hearted story with nothing complicated, this would be perfect. So go for it 😍😉 Though it seems to be a simple love story, it speaks volumes about the struggles one might face in different circumstances in their life through different characters giving us readers the confidence to never lose hope despite the predicament that we are faced with. The characters are well developed, each having a pivotal role in the navigation of the story. Love is not just a word ot momentary happiness but the understanding and commitment to one another throughout their shared life❤️❤️ Thank you dear author for writing such a great story and giving us the privilege to experience it ❤🧡💛💚💙💜 PS: The only con that majorly find in the writing is that, sometimes the description is stretched too much with little to no conversations in the chapters. I think including more conversations and reducing the unnecessary stretching of the scene description would make it even more attractive.

Fancy Me, Professor!

MysticAmy
4.7
477 Chs

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MysticAmy
MysticAmyAuthor

Aaaaw! Thank you so much for the review! I appreciate and love that you enjoyed it! I am also grateful for our brainstorming session that without it, I wouldn't have finished this book! And yes, I agree with your PS! :3 I was thinking too much of the scenery and narrations that I forgot mostly the dialogues. Thank you and I will keep this in mind! Do take care always, Nosliw! ^_^

9mth
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Nosliw
NosliwLv14

I'm glad that I could be of help 😊 and thank you for your kindness 😄 I wish good health and happiness for the entirety of your family and yourself 🤗 Do take good care of your health and try not to overwork as you tend to do so 😔 Smile is one's best outfit... keep smiling 😘

MysticAmy:Aaaaw! Thank you so much for the review! I appreciate and love that you enjoyed it! I am also grateful for our brainstorming session that without it, I wouldn't have finished this book! And yes, I agree with your PS! :3 I was thinking too much of the scenery and narrations that I forgot mostly the dialogues. Thank you and I will keep this in mind! Do take care always, Nosliw! ^_^
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Hazel_Cat_Eyes
Hazel_Cat_EyesLv15

Although this book is just beginning, I can say that it has already captured my interest and has me eagerly awaiting the next chapter update. The author’s writing style and grammar usage is easy to read and follow. I am currently reading another of her books and if this book proves to be anything close to it in comparison, then it will be divine as well!

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MysticAmy
MysticAmyAuthor

As usual, I will give myself a review and assess myself. 😁 For writing quality, I give myself a 4. In all the novels I’ve written so far, I mostly give myself a 4 here because I find myself not being too satisfied with how I write—how I narrate, and my choice of vocabulary. Yes, I am my own perfectionist and I always believe that I can do more—I can do better. But alas, my laziness and my schedule is saying otherwise. 😅 Nevertheless, I’ll try my best to strive! Update stability, I give myself a 5. Why the heck not? 😂 With or without stockpile, I give myself a pat in the back for updating daily~! Story development, I give it a 5. I may have written 30 chapters so far (others published, orthers stockpiled), but I am proud of the pacing of my story. Not too slow, not too fast—just right. Other than that, no excessive info dumps and would just rely on the flow of the story for concepts to happen. 😁 Character design, I can give it a 5. This is something I am planning way before I even posted the book for the Spirity entry. Furthermore, I am actually enjoying how I also create characters along the way as I write! It means that my creativity is not failing me! Lastly, world background, 5. Since it’s not fantasy, I find the setting of the story easier to make even as I go along with the story. However, further researches should be done so as to avoid loopholes or misgiving of informations and whatnot. This leaves me with an overall rate of 4.8 on my book. This is my first time doing contemporary romance and I do hope I can pull this off~! Regards to me and everyone participating in the Spirity! May our words be plenty, my our creativity be spontaneous, and may the odds be ever in our favor~! 😉💪

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Chichii
ChichiiLv14

Yeahhh it’s finally here. What happens when a shy,clumsy and overthinker girl gets to live with her sexy heart throb professor😍will she fall for him and tame his wild heart ? Or will he rather seduce her, break her heart....or break something else rather as they get closer through a series of event. 😉🥴. Don’t mind me im just a pervy! Grammar is excellent, easy to comprehend. No headaches when reading😹💔trust me! So what are you waiting for? Go on read the book don’t be shy. Wait... just make sure you’re 18+ first😉becuz some scenes may be too hot for you to handle! Enjoy the ride, loves💜

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Nma_cherish2002
Nma_cherish2002Lv2

The way the connection goes mennnnnn am loving it 4-5 people against 1 at least am relax that wicked uncle won't have his way with Zheng around but please 🙏🙏🙏🙏 do well to update in lightReader I don't know how to buy coin and use please help I love all your stories and I also love u

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Dundet
DundetLv15

I surprised myself of giving the rating of 3 which I hardly give to other novel which most of them are not closed to be considered good one. This one however is pretty good thus far, I like of not having over exagerating display of wealth like other novels have. Though if I have to comment I found quiet irritating ro read a chapter that at least quarter of the page is repaearing or copyboast of the previous chapter paragraph. I hope it can be fixed soon. I reserve for higher rating depending on how this Pan An react after meet the ex, if he waver or even entertain tonspemd his time for old sake memory I will condemn him and let him suffer of a real loss and I will ship our FL with Zhong Li. So, please author don't turn this novel into a telenovela with all unnecessary makjang.

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Q_elleson
Q_ellesonLv1

I really like how the plot is unfolding and the various character development, I hope it continues this way with not so much drama to create boredom. I like the consistency in updates too. Thanks Author ☺️

3yr
Infinite888
Infinite888Lv4

who wouldn't give 5 stars in this story? this is story is pretty good😍😍 in just the first Chap... it made me excited!!! guys better read this!!! gotta read some more chaps😍😍😍😍

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Amy566
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its beautiful, very very beautiful story, the author is doing great job, the grammar and writing style is too good, but what more the plot is too good, the story keep hooking that u wanted to read more.

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Zeno98
Zeno98Lv14

I already know the author for her other works and i can really see that this novel will be really great!!🤩🤩🤩 She is a very experienced writer with a lot of ides and passion for her novels.😁😁😁 I really can't wait to see in what kind of journey she is about to take us.😊😊😊

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