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MKWAMELv153yr
2021-05-27 13:53

Good book just not my cup of tea. I get irrationally irritated by MC gets system at perfect time. MC gets evaluation of the lowest order. MC is a crouching tiger in a field of sheep. MC will now hide and be bullied cause of said low evaluation. ahhh honestly it's because I like to predict what will happen next. Interesting premise though just not executed to my liking.

Cultivation Through Artifacts

Gery_
4.3
527 Chs

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FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

I just read all chapters and wanted to say that ( Kinda Spoilers [probably not exactly lol] ): 1. He won't be weak for long time 2. He won't hide, actually it will be quite the opposite (Won't spoil but its in the later half the chapters. 3. He will be ridiculed for very short time and after what happens because ot my previous statement it won't continue. Just writing this so you or anybody else who thinks to drop this novel because of those reasons can give it another chance.

3yr
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Defender_of_Nature
Defender_of_NatureLv11

It's more the MC is powerful but it's weak to strong. Don't get me wrong Khal is technically a crouching tiger but he isn't overpowered he is justing stronger than the rest. And he will get stronger as the novel keeps going, it's not one of that trash overpowered MC novels where the MC is treated as weak when he is not it's more unique in that the MC is powerful but goes through many hardship and difficulties.

3yr
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MKWAME
MKWAMELv15

I don't think I made it to his struggles part I think it was ch52 idk thats what webnovel loaded me on but I forget. I'm all for struggles though I love it because it makes the MC more grounded in reality if done correctly (even though it's fantasy.)

Defender_of_Nature:It's more the MC is powerful but it's weak to strong. Don't get me wrong Khal is technically a crouching tiger but he isn't overpowered he is justing stronger than the rest. And he will get stronger as the novel keeps going, it's not one of that trash overpowered MC novels where the MC is treated as weak when he is not it's more unique in that the MC is powerful but goes through many hardship and difficulties.
3yr
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MKWAME
MKWAMELv15

also to preface my original comment. i probably only read to ch52(idk whatever chapter was 26days ago) and wrote off the book. so I would take what I wrote with a grain of salt and read the replies they seem to have read to current chapters^^

3yr
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Defender_of_Nature
Defender_of_NatureLv11

Yeah I am on the latest chapter and finished it but I don't see the correlation to your statement but I do know some reviewers to be harsh it's just that these types of people read the first few chapters and make harsh comments on the novel even though from the first few chapters don't show the surface of what the novel in about.

3yr
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The_Starters
The_StartersLv1

will they confess to each other or will they remain as close friends!!!?? pls don't do that it would be disgusting🤢

3yr
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FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

So far (chap 190) nothing has happened in the romance department.

The_Starters:will they confess to each other or will they remain as close friends!!!?? pls don't do that it would be disgusting🤢
3yr
4
Hashashin_null_00
Hashashin_null_00Lv4

At first I thought it'll be same boring system novel but I was surprised it was actually good . The story moves at an moderate pace with no character getting left behind . Overall I was suprised and I hope the story will move forward in same pace

3yr
The_Starters
The_StartersLv1

hey author when will the romance part starts!?? there's a romance tag right, atleast add the part in vol-3

3yr
MKWAME
MKWAMELv15

o wow this thread still going strong how's the book?

The_Starters:hey author when will the romance part starts!?? there's a romance tag right, atleast add the part in vol-3
3yr
The_Starters
The_StartersLv1

well the story is awesome. I read till the chapter 239. after reading till here I can see author trying to make the romance part come to life(I think). but the personality of mc has changed. so I hope there will be romance in the later chaps..

MKWAME:o wow this thread still going strong how's the book?
3yr
Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4

lol,go read the god of systems,then you'll know what OP is

Defender_of_Nature:It's more the MC is powerful but it's weak to strong. Don't get me wrong Khal is technically a crouching tiger but he isn't overpowered he is justing stronger than the rest. And he will get stronger as the novel keeps going, it's not one of that trash overpowered MC novels where the MC is treated as weak when he is not it's more unique in that the MC is powerful but goes through many hardship and difficulties.
2yr
GreatDaoofspace
GreatDaoofspaceLv15

Romance ?harem?

2yr
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heavenlyzhanghao
heavenlyzhanghaoLv4

lol even if hide and he's says he will stay low key the author will give him problems and struggles thinking it was interesting 💀 lol the mc getting a sealed talent in front of a lot of people is so unnecessary i mean it jus doesn't make sense why his talent is sealed together with his natural talent because of not meeting a requirement when awakening a talent literally just need to drink a awakening potion or something to awaken but it was sealed together with his natural talent. Now he has to deal with bullying lol after reading the chapter i immediately drop the novel cuz it has a trashy start chz it's so unbearable and unnecessary

FallenAngeI:I just read all chapters and wanted to say that ( Kinda Spoilers [probably not exactly lol] ): 1. He won't be weak for long time 2. He won't hide, actually it will be quite the opposite (Won't spoil but its in the later half the chapters. 3. He will be ridiculed for very short time and after what happens because ot my previous statement it won't continue. Just writing this so you or anybody else who thinks to drop this novel because of those reasons can give it another chance.
1yr
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TimVic
TimVicLv15

Man this is some good stuff. The feels in the writing is spectacular, it will definitely pull you in. The storyline, the plot and characters all well written. Keep it up man.

3yr

REDVI
REDVILv4

Honestly this is boring nothing more to be said...

3yr
FAKER_101
FAKER_101Lv1

did not really find it that good Idk why everyone says it good? I am at chapter 32 and I still find the mc kinda stupid and he should have the advantage of an extra life and act more smarter

3yr
MadHatter0_o
MadHatter0_oLv3

Considering this story has barely started, I think it will be safe to say that it is NOT a review more of a wish letter. So, this is my personal opinion which is heavily biased. I hope this will be of some help to the author. I also want to say that I am a current reader of the author's other work "Journey of a legend". I might compare certain aspects of this work's writing style to that as this work is heavily unfinished. Concept: It's a very interesting and, as I have not read anything like that before, unique concept. Cultivating using artifacts that are apparently only used for making jewelry. This has a lot of scopes to introduce new things. I am very eager to see how things unfold as chapters come out. I will say that if the cultivation is half as good as "journey of a legend" then it will be awesome. But looking at the auxiliary chapter it seems this system will more than a match for that. The separation of realms and each realm with their unique rules and worlds is very intriguing too. In short, conception-wise, this work is phenomenal. Story: Amazing prologue. I really loved it and it easily catches attention. It was dark and gritty but at the same time deep. And I love the fact that you left some part to the reader's imagination and make them rationalize why Cal did what he did. I am eager to see how you develop the story. Whether you give Cal and Khal parallel life or it is something else. Characters: There aren't many characters introduced yet to talk about them. One thing I liked is that you gave a brief description of the characters' appearance (MC excluded). If possible try to include personality traits in them(Like, instead of saying brown eyes, say brown eye full of mischief). It helps to know them more and visualize easily. But this is my personal opinion so feel free to ignore it. However, I would like to state 2 major things about MC and his love interest. The prologue gives the idea of a dark MC. So, either we get a dark MC or a moderate one with extensive character development. If you suddenly change the MC's attitude without proper development it throws off the readers. I feel the need to mention this because this has already happened(in the trial). His reaction after the scuffle with that young master does not complement his backstory at all and it threw me off. Secondly, as it is a non-harem novel and unless you are planning to give us a major plot twist we already have the love interest. The issue with introducing a love interest this early is that you need to give the character the same amount of care as MC. I really like to have her a great first impression and proper development. I will just say that I would rather not have another Emma in terms of initial introduction [img=recommend]. As for world development, character development, there is no point in saying about it now. And, as for writing style and spelling mistakes, it has significantly improved in this work. so not much there to say about it. I wish you good luck with your work and looking forward to future chapters. I hope it's as good, if not better, as your other work. Thank you for your hard work. Keep it up!

3yr
Regina_Amet
Regina_AmetLv2

Pretty cool Novel has potential I'm sure more exciting scenes await us as we progress. I believe it will attract more readers as time goes on. I also hope she has a strong partner that supports the lead character, Hate-harem, I hope no harem Good luck

3yr
indiferente
indiferenteLv4

Well... the story at the end is the author's and I respect his decisions, it's well written and all, but it's more of the same with a bit of a cliche. My personal opinion, I miss adversity, the feeling of irreverence. in the end I like stories that involve power, POWER, BATTLES, the feeling like "I'm going to destroy the Gods". the love plot bleh mc got tied to a girl barely introduced to history since the first chapter.

3yr
Clockhours
ClockhoursLv4

The storyline seems interesting, the book will become more solid if you give the characters more depth. Keep up the good work and the book more unique.

3yr
LonelyAtPeak
LonelyAtPeakLv4

Well it is quite good . MC personality is also good not like Chinese arrogant MC like I will never bow to anyone . Well it also has many mysterious upper realms which is quite good I just want to read it faster I can't contain my excitement and also FMC is also good she is quite talented at leagues of true geniuses. Overall love it keep it up author-san and release more chapters pl...💖💖💖

3yr
NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNLv14

Reveal spoiler

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