Review Detail of Garessta in Taming My Vampire Servant

Writing quality is good, but could've been better. There are some typos and weirdly written things there and there, plus i'd say that the story would've benefitted from more and better descriptions. Plot-wise... it starts of with a bait and switches into infodumps, but fine, fine. It has originality as fantasy stories go, that I admit. But I think that there are too little of secondary characters introduced in a very short amount of time - it makes me confused with all of them.