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How am I not surprised

I won't write review because I would definitely bash the author. So far, I am on ch9 and it feels as if all the MC did was drink, drink, drink, Wizengamot, drink, drink, act cool for females, drink. I mean... COME ON. I am here for the Harry Potter fanfic, not a story where a pretentious **** is drinking his way to an early grave. Sure, write about him drinking if you want but this is overdone. Every fucking chapter has it.

Just finished ch14. Drinking changed to fucking. Honestly... if I was needy te*nager I would probably like it. Since I am not, I find the MC a bit deplorable and pathetic. Okay, spoiler to explain my opinion... MC thinks of Remus as if he was his uncle. It is not stated but it is implied. Remus likes Tonks. MC fucks Tonks. Remus knows MC fucks Tonks. MC encourages Remus to tell Tonks he likes her because they are just friends with benefits. MC still fucks Tonks. Tonks, out of nowhere, decides she likes Remus in the middle of s*x with MC. MC fucks Tonks and encourages her to get together with Remus. Is it just me who finds it a bit... I don't know. Ugh? MC is literally fucking the woman his uncle likes and he even has the gall to tell the man into his face he is doing it and that he should man up and confess to her? And after getting to know that Remus still likes Tonks, what does Harry do? He fucks her again. Because, why not? Fuck Remus. Now... the author implied that Tonks started liking Harry in earlier chapters, then decided that Tonks is not the girl for him, and kept her on a s*x buddies basis. Fine. That's okay. He didn't want to make her a love interest? That's completely fine. But this was overdone as f*. Poor Remus. And I am one of those who do not like the werewolf. But still... poor Remus. If I had a girl I really liked and she knew I liked her while he liked me back but we were just in the phase of doing doe eyes at each other... And then she went to my brother for a quick casual f*... And on top of that, my brother fcked her despite him knowing I liked her and then said brother told me she confessed to him while he was pounding her into the pillows, that she liked me and that I could have her because she was just a casual friend with benefits, one good for a quick f*, I would not be amused. I would probably not want the girl anymore. I would probably be pissed at the said brother too. (I am kinda happy I do not have a brother now) Maybe I am a bit too immature for not wanting my supposed brother's leftovers... Anyway, the MC still shows the typical behavior of a rebellious te*nager who thinks he is a boss. Fucking, drinking, and I am still waiting for smoking. Honestly, by now, Voldemort and his Death Munchers stopped being that important and I half-expect them to just drop down and die. As long as the MC is nailing Tonks to bed while Remus is aware of it, all is fine. Fortunately, Hogwarts starts again and MC and Tonks broke up their casual s*x-friendliness. She can now go and f* Remus now that the MC went back to school. We all know how Remus loves hand-me-downs and second-hand goods. Especially when they are given to him after Harry thoroughly used them and let him know about the quality! He will be thrilled. I am sure of it. (Plot-forcing for the win! Yay!) The problem is not even that this happened. It was HOW it happened that made me want to rub my eyes with salt. --- I am sorry, Mr. Atuhor. But this is seriously my utmost honesty. The Grammar, World Background, and everything are fine. I simply do not like how the MC is acting. His only redeeming quality is that he somehow still at least try to prepare for Voldemort. Not that he does much on that front. I won't write a review since I do not want to drag the rating of this novel down. It has its redeeming qualities but the Mc is ruining the experience for me. Anyway, anyone interested... Do not read this story with your brain cells active. You probably won't enjoy the experience. My advice... Turn them off and then the story is fine. You will probably even like it. Just... don't use your brain. And maybe look for your te*nage memories and days where you were just bratty little sh*ts. It might help with understanding the MC.