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2021-07-26 00:05

The main character is likeable, kinda dumb at times bit that's perfect for 16 year old , it would be irritating if he would be too smart or ruthless. But the pacing is getting slower and slower , the side characters are also being beautifully developed, the system is too omniscient though, I had only one issue with it that the pacing is too slow , it been more than 100+ chapters but it hasn't even been a week in the novel , the length of the updates are too short and it's only one chapter a day or two , seriously dusturbs the flpw of the reader

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