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You have a point , it would be a cliche if there is not much of relationship building between the 2 and the girl falls head over heels for him outta nowhere. There was anice buildup for celine.Amazing character building, sad past, goals in life, etc etc. but there was not much of a story till now between him and others except wendy could be his past wife too.
So, Sidonie is no different than Lionel , she acts the same way for William as Lionel does for her and she sees him with utter disdain. The chapters are making her look more and more pathetic, Priscilla' character is 100 times better. The constant repetition of making babies is making this great novel lose track of it originally was đ, making another novel where MC is getting everything he wants out of thin air , jade beauties falling down from skies ....etc
of courseđ
Go Celine and Kasoganaga, burn every last one of the elves to the ground. I bet William would wimp out from touching this princess coz she is innocent and her mother's disciple and somehow add her to the harem ( that grey haired william had one elf in his life, could be this particular elf )
Lol, I wish we would come to know that there is a demigod in Lont
F for eve and children of the orphanage
it's not thrilling to foreshadowing every chapter ,building up and building up would lead to even more disappointment if not executed properly
The main character is likeable, kinda dumb at times bit that's perfect for 16 year old , it would be irritating if he would be too smart or ruthless. But the pacing is getting slower and slower , the side characters are also being beautifully developed, the system is too omniscient though, I had only one issue with it that the pacing is too slow , it been more than 100+ chapters but it hasn't even been a week in the novel , the length of the updates are too short and it's only one chapter a day or two , seriously dusturbs the flpw of the reader