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Psan
PsanLv53yr
2021-04-01 06:08

Hello, first time i see an Asobi Ni Iku Yo! Fanfic with a system, hopefully, you dont drop it. As the series is one of my favorites and i have seen the anime a few times, tried to read the novel but its very hard to find, even the raws are impossible to find. The story needs editing since there are some very awkward sentences and words, but other than that, its need to be more than 1500 words long excluding the status of the mc. This is because the status takes a lot of space of the actual chapter. So its a recomendation that the chapter word count should not include the status screen towards the word count.

Adventure with Harem and the System

Voiceless_Lord
4.7
106 Chs

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Voiceless_Lord
Voiceless_LordAuthor

Thank you. Its my first time so I will try to improve on the sentences and the number of words. Thank you for informing me.

3yr
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Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2

Is thisa huge harem?

Voiceless_Lord:Thank you. Its my first time so I will try to improve on the sentences and the number of words. Thank you for informing me.
3yr
Voiceless_Lord
Voiceless_LordAuthor

I'm very sorry for the late reply. Yes, this fan-fic has a huge harem so if you're not a fan of the harem genre. I don't recommend it. If you already read it, thank you so much for spending your time to read my fan-fic. I appreciate it very much.

Nafsu_geass28:Is thisa huge harem?
3yr
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Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2

Thank you i like harem

Voiceless_Lord:I'm very sorry for the late reply. Yes, this fan-fic has a huge harem so if you're not a fan of the harem genre. I don't recommend it. If you already read it, thank you so much for spending your time to read my fan-fic. I appreciate it very much.
3yr
Jackson_Alucard611
Jackson_Alucard611Lv14

I have 2 questions 1. does he like all of them and does he date them 2. are going down the lemon path in the future?

Voiceless_Lord:I'm very sorry for the late reply. Yes, this fan-fic has a huge harem so if you're not a fan of the harem genre. I don't recommend it. If you already read it, thank you so much for spending your time to read my fan-fic. I appreciate it very much.
3yr
Voiceless_Lord
Voiceless_LordAuthor

For those answers: 1. Yes, he loves him and he will date them but in his harem, there are only the girls who truly love him. For the girls that have slight interest in him or he interest in them, the girls may be placed under him as his friends, subordinates or maybe a rival. 2. Lemon path. Hmm 🤔...this is a bit difficult for me to answer as I want just to skip lemon scene in this fan-fic but some readers like to read it. So, maybe there are lemon paths in the future but not so often. Maybe 😏

Jackson_Alucard611:I have 2 questions 1. does he like all of them and does he date them 2. are going down the lemon path in the future?
3yr
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Jackson_Alucard611
Jackson_Alucard611Lv14

count me in oh one more thing are the harem members from different anime and will they follow him through world jumping

Voiceless_Lord:For those answers: 1. Yes, he loves him and he will date them but in his harem, there are only the girls who truly love him. For the girls that have slight interest in him or he interest in them, the girls may be placed under him as his friends, subordinates or maybe a rival. 2. Lemon path. Hmm 🤔...this is a bit difficult for me to answer as I want just to skip lemon scene in this fan-fic but some readers like to read it. So, maybe there are lemon paths in the future but not so often. Maybe 😏
3yr
Voiceless_Lord
Voiceless_LordAuthor

Yes, there will be harem members from different anime and they will follow him to travel another world. However, that world maybe just an arc without additional harem members but I will try to add at least one new harem members for each world that MC will be travelled.

Jackson_Alucard611:count me in oh one more thing are the harem members from different anime and will they follow him through world jumping
3yr
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Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2

Can you add to the harem 10000 girls?

Voiceless_Lord:I'm very sorry for the late reply. Yes, this fan-fic has a huge harem so if you're not a fan of the harem genre. I don't recommend it. If you already read it, thank you so much for spending your time to read my fan-fic. I appreciate it very much.
3yr
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Voiceless_Lord
Voiceless_LordAuthor

Hmm...I couldn't guarantee for 10 000 girls in harem but I assure you that I will add at least 50 girls into the harem. Just be patient for now as this fan-fic just getting started.

Nafsu_geass28:Can you add to the harem 10000 girls?
3yr
Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2

okay I agree. Is miwen not a virgin?

Voiceless_Lord:Hmm...I couldn't guarantee for 10 000 girls in harem but I assure you that I will add at least 50 girls into the harem. Just be patient for now as this fan-fic just getting started.
3yr
Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2

instead of this the multiverse, there should be plenty of girls for the harem, don't leave one out. sorry this is just my opinion

Voiceless_Lord:Hmm...I couldn't guarantee for 10 000 girls in harem but I assure you that I will add at least 50 girls into the harem. Just be patient for now as this fan-fic just getting started.
3yr
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For readers to know, the author, has improved considerably compared from the beginning, hopefully, he can edit old chapters since they can scare readers off. I write this to show that the author has put a lot of effort in improving his writing skills. So the future of this novel seems to be getting better and better. Most other authors will not bother to change their writing or try to improve their skills so one can see that this author is serious about it. SO you get browny points!

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Reading this is so awkward.. "*blush furiously*: Manami!!! What are you talking about!!! "Kkyyyuuuu *embarassed*" Reading that felt so weird (the 3 ! in a row feel like a little kid trying to write something "important"..) The writing quality leaves a lot to be desired. Its not the worst that i saw on this site but it needs a lot of work. It may even better to write it in the authors native language, use google translate afterwards and edit it afterwards.

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MonkeReviewer
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It is not bad but I can see mistakes in the wordings and after dialogues there is sentences that just says what happen or the obvious and the cliche on this is kind of strong(I despise cliche as they majority of the time ruined a good story). Overall I would read it if you don’t mind being reminded the obvious after dialogues and cliches.

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Thom_Costa
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Só posso dizer exelent Tanto o crescimento do autor quanto o da estória. Um desenvolvimento perceptível que da para perceber durante os capítulos. Obrigado por uma boa estória.

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kevin_saputra
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yes I'm your story because you take the basis of a rare world and almost no fanfic about this world, I've read until the latest chapter and I love it. The idea of a multiverse Portal to take his subordinates and family to another world is also good because it can still be made with the Technology of the First world. yes I hope you continue your story and never drop your story until your story is finished.

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