Background is great. Writing quality is noteworhty. Story development is solid and tension is there. Plot is creative. Characters are great and the dialogue is superb. I would have liked to see a bit more description of how the characters looked and what the setting looked like. The world background seems to be solid and well fleshed out. Good job.
BlindBandit
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