What to say about this book? The plot is original and I really look forward to discovering more about it. Especially as this book is full of mysteries. The author, besides writing perfectly, really knows how to play with the readers! Most importantly, my cat was sitting on my lap, staring at the screen while I was reading. Soooo this book is cat-approved 😂😂😂

This is amazing, and well written. ♥ ♥ I'm so thankful for stumbling upon this great piece. It's an absolute beautiful piece of writing, you guys gotta try this one out, you won't regret it. Just the prologue got me hooked. I'm so diving into this one. Great job, author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]You are a wonderful writer.

I like how the writer describe the characters and how their mind works. Please keep updating sooner. I am excited with how things will turn out.

I'm jealous of how well-written this story. 😅 It's very fast-paced that I've forgotten I almost finished the chapters in a single read. That's how I got so engrossed in this book. Excellent job author. every chapter is a revelation.

I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.

Good novel, I really like it. It's very nice, how the story was developed, how the plot was designed and the details of it. Nice [img=update]

You made me fall in love with your book! Yes, I felt for it, what can I do? Well, first I already added to my library! Hope to read more! Keep going y dear! The author's journey is long!

Instantly fell in love with the story characters. Love the sibling bonding how the FL brother encourages their sister. Love the storyline and especially Fl and Ml

hi, totally not a sock puppet for a review swapper here. let me get the boring stuff out of the way, followed by critiques and praise. Starting with grammar, a lot of the sentences felt like runons to me. I found myself constantly wanting to stop and grab a red sharpie, which is bad for immersion. Second, the dialogue (this is my big critique). When the characters speak, it sounds like they all have the same voice. I imagined the little sister a certain way on her introduction, but she speaks like an *****. the case is the same for the evil stepmother and daughter, only they add a b-word every other line. now this isn't too huge a problem, except the voice they all use makes no sense. in real life, we often leave things unsaid; here, they openly state their motivations and goals. Not only does this make the stuff in quotes longer than it should be, it also makes me feel like my hand is being held with every sentence. As for the good stuff, I think your audience engagement is amazing. the little creator thoughts really allow your earnestness of the work to shine, making me want to engage further despite not being that big a fan of the story. the creative titles for each chapter as also great... it makes me, I mean some other writers, wish they weren't so lazy in just numbering them out.

Wooow , the first novel I have read where the fl and her sister are on good terms. The novel itself is very beautiful and sooo fluffy. Great job, author-chan.