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NobleKei
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2021-03-31 01:26

Well, The grammar isn't too good, The development seems bland and the writing doesn't explain much. Only read like 2~3 chapters but it was barely readable for me, which i decided wasn't worth the effort. I will give points for the PVZ idea tho

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Keep up the good work btw, I'm sure if you keep improving, you can make mind blowing novels.

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