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to be honest story is good but It does not have potential no creativity whatsoever nor proper information 🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠😔😔😔😔😔

Well, The grammar isn't too good, The development seems bland and the writing doesn't explain much. Only read like 2~3 chapters but it was barely readable for me, which i decided wasn't worth the effort. I will give points for the PVZ idea tho

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this story is not bad but it needs to be more longer and more an idea to make the storyline much better than before and take your time in this because it has a potential to be a good story but you need more information and ideas how to make it work

No semblance of anything like grammar, 0 effort to develop any type story, it's just pure shite being written at maximum speed. A baby is allowed to sell ilegal drugs at age 2 by his legal guardian who then tries to rape him all in good fun. The story is way too forced in an attempt to produce humour.

Must say this ff had potential but needs a much-needed proofreading. Also, the fact that he could beat Midnight when he is only 2 years old is kind of ridiculous, not even mentioning that he was cuffed afterwords. To sum it up, no one seems to care that a two-year-old is behaving like an *****. __________________________________

Keep up the good work my guy interestIng idea C

the concept has potential, but the fact that you don't know how to write and possibly translating the final result... well... you ruin the novel a little bit too much (I read until chapter 12)