Item: PVZ system by the multiverse.
Rating: 2.2
Author: Man_of_culture

Man_of_cultureLv113yr

2021-03-28 01:41

Must say this ff had potential but needs a much-needed proofreading. Also, the fact that he could beat Midnight when he is only 2 years old is kind of ridiculous, not even mentioning that he was cuffed afterwords. To sum it up, no one seems to care that a two-year-old is behaving like an *****. __________________________________

PVZ system by the multiverse.

patinhoDEUSVULT

3.6

60 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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patinhoDEUSVULTAuthor

Who knocked out was the pea thrown at a speed of 90 meters per second.

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