Review Detail of Aeternabilis in Story: Fate/ Against Fight
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Wouldn't rly recommend it from personal taste. The mc is just way to weak willed, kinda pathetic in a strange way? I should have guessed from the first chapter but I gave it a go still so yeah... His not wanting to be a pure fairy makes no fcking sense either. The excuse is so weak it's not even funny. I mean he doesn't want to be one because he doesn't want to be hunted... but then he is still half-fairy so he is gonna be hunted anyway... It's mind-blowing how stupid this is. I don't rly like the story of the idea of the whole getting experience points to unlock sht. I wish he just had the spear and worked it up like king. Maybe the book would just be to upgrade stuff to a higher than max or something... or just purely something to record things in and a status panel/answer machine or something I feel with the author's story idea it would have been much more interesting if the mc was born as a fairy in the fairy world or maybe born when the fairy world first came to be as the first fairy. Obviously, spend a couple of hundred years in the fairy world exploring it all, getting strong etc. He could use his book as a thing to write all his adventures, history etc. So becoming like an ancient fairy who records history and adventures if you get me? I feel that this would have suited the author's idea much more. But yeah... Gl to the author but not a fan of the weak personality of the mc.
Story: Fate/ Against Fight
J_Titan
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Aeternabilis:My god calling me stupid? Calm tf down. When did I say he would be op? I never mentioned this at all. The spear isn't op. In the fate verse, there are TONS of people WAY stronger than the spear. It is strong and versatile, yeah but it isn't anywhere near op for that verse. It is strong, yeah I agree. He can defeat a fair few, but he would still have to build it up like I mentioned so at the start it wouldn't even be that strong. So get the fck out here saying sht like that. Second? I can't even comment cause you know what is going to happen. All I can go off of is what is written. This is what I have done and I have clearly explained my reasoning. If you don't like that fine. Say the reasoning for why is later. If you carry on reading then it will make sense. Not go crying saying your too lazy to explain and that you don't care. I have clearly and in detail explained my thoughts on the story. You can take it how you want. Use it to help you, ignore it because it doesn't. Others can use it to help them if decide if they want to give the story a go. Calling me an idiot, a retard, wuxia fan is just pure childish. Then coming back 10 hours later to comment again on how you don't care... clearly you do. I have no words for this. So yeah gl on your story and try to be a bit more grown up.
Tell me if it is you're retarded or pure idiot. I freaking mentioned in description that he won't be op so why the hell I you came. Second, why doesn't he like to be fairy? I was going to explain this shit in later chapter but not gonna explain here. Well I am too lazy to even explain anything when wuxia shit fans came to criticized a light story.
My god calling me stupid? Calm tf down. When did I say he would be op? I never mentioned this at all. The spear isn't op. In the fate verse, there are TONS of people WAY stronger than the spear. It is strong and versatile, yeah but it isn't anywhere near op for that verse. It is strong, yeah I agree. He can defeat a fair few, but he would still have to build it up like I mentioned so at the start it wouldn't even be that strong. So get the fck out here saying sht like that. Second? I can't even comment cause you know what is going to happen. All I can go off of is what is written. This is what I have done and I have clearly explained my reasoning. If you don't like that fine. Say the reasoning for why is later. If you carry on reading then it will make sense. Not go crying saying your too lazy to explain and that you don't care. I have clearly and in detail explained my thoughts on the story. You can take it how you want. Use it to help you, ignore it because it doesn't. Others can use it to help them if decide if they want to give the story a go. Calling me an idiot, a retard, wuxia fan is just pure childish. Then coming back 10 hours later to comment again on how you don't care... clearly you do. I have no words for this. So yeah gl on your story and try to be a bit more grown up.
J_Titan:Tell me if it is you're retarded or pure idiot. I freaking mentioned in description that he won't be op so why the hell I you came. Second, why doesn't he like to be fairy? I was going to explain this shit in later chapter but not gonna explain here. Well I am too lazy to even explain anything when wuxia shit fans came to criticized a light story.
Aeternabilis:My god calling me stupid? Calm tf down. When did I say he would be op? I never mentioned this at all. The spear isn't op. In the fate verse, there are TONS of people WAY stronger than the spear. It is strong and versatile, yeah but it isn't anywhere near op for that verse. It is strong, yeah I agree. He can defeat a fair few, but he would still have to build it up like I mentioned so at the start it wouldn't even be that strong. So get the fck out here saying sht like that. Second? I can't even comment cause you know what is going to happen. All I can go off of is what is written. This is what I have done and I have clearly explained my reasoning. If you don't like that fine. Say the reasoning for why is later. If you carry on reading then it will make sense. Not go crying saying your too lazy to explain and that you don't care. I have clearly and in detail explained my thoughts on the story. You can take it how you want. Use it to help you, ignore it because it doesn't. Others can use it to help them if decide if they want to give the story a go. Calling me an idiot, a retard, wuxia fan is just pure childish. Then coming back 10 hours later to comment again on how you don't care... clearly you do. I have no words for this. So yeah gl on your story and try to be a bit more grown up.
I wouldn't have read this novel anyways as based on your review I wouldn't be able to stand the MC's actions but the author's response and going directly to personal insults as a response to your constructive criticism definitely reaffirms my decision.
Aeternabilis:My god calling me stupid? Calm tf down. When did I say he would be op? I never mentioned this at all. The spear isn't op. In the fate verse, there are TONS of people WAY stronger than the spear. It is strong and versatile, yeah but it isn't anywhere near op for that verse. It is strong, yeah I agree. He can defeat a fair few, but he would still have to build it up like I mentioned so at the start it wouldn't even be that strong. So get the fck out here saying sht like that. Second? I can't even comment cause you know what is going to happen. All I can go off of is what is written. This is what I have done and I have clearly explained my reasoning. If you don't like that fine. Say the reasoning for why is later. If you carry on reading then it will make sense. Not go crying saying your too lazy to explain and that you don't care. I have clearly and in detail explained my thoughts on the story. You can take it how you want. Use it to help you, ignore it because it doesn't. Others can use it to help them if decide if they want to give the story a go. Calling me an idiot, a retard, wuxia fan is just pure childish. Then coming back 10 hours later to comment again on how you don't care... clearly you do. I have no words for this. So yeah gl on your story and try to be a bit more grown up.
Aeternabilis:My god calling me stupid? Calm tf down. When did I say he would be op? I never mentioned this at all. The spear isn't op. In the fate verse, there are TONS of people WAY stronger than the spear. It is strong and versatile, yeah but it isn't anywhere near op for that verse. It is strong, yeah I agree. He can defeat a fair few, but he would still have to build it up like I mentioned so at the start it wouldn't even be that strong. So get the fck out here saying sht like that. Second? I can't even comment cause you know what is going to happen. All I can go off of is what is written. This is what I have done and I have clearly explained my reasoning. If you don't like that fine. Say the reasoning for why is later. If you carry on reading then it will make sense. Not go crying saying your too lazy to explain and that you don't care. I have clearly and in detail explained my thoughts on the story. You can take it how you want. Use it to help you, ignore it because it doesn't. Others can use it to help them if decide if they want to give the story a go. Calling me an idiot, a retard, wuxia fan is just pure childish. Then coming back 10 hours later to comment again on how you don't care... clearly you do. I have no words for this. So yeah gl on your story and try to be a bit more grown up.
J_Titan:Tell me if it is you're retarded or pure idiot. I freaking mentioned in description that he won't be op so why the hell I you came. Second, why doesn't he like to be fairy? I was going to explain this shit in later chapter but not gonna explain here. Well I am too lazy to even explain anything when wuxia shit fans came to criticized a light story.
Aeternabilis:My god calling me stupid? Calm tf down. When did I say he would be op? I never mentioned this at all. The spear isn't op. In the fate verse, there are TONS of people WAY stronger than the spear. It is strong and versatile, yeah but it isn't anywhere near op for that verse. It is strong, yeah I agree. He can defeat a fair few, but he would still have to build it up like I mentioned so at the start it wouldn't even be that strong. So get the fck out here saying sht like that. Second? I can't even comment cause you know what is going to happen. All I can go off of is what is written. This is what I have done and I have clearly explained my reasoning. If you don't like that fine. Say the reasoning for why is later. If you carry on reading then it will make sense. Not go crying saying your too lazy to explain and that you don't care. I have clearly and in detail explained my thoughts on the story. You can take it how you want. Use it to help you, ignore it because it doesn't. Others can use it to help them if decide if they want to give the story a go. Calling me an idiot, a retard, wuxia fan is just pure childish. Then coming back 10 hours later to comment again on how you don't care... clearly you do. I have no words for this. So yeah gl on your story and try to be a bit more grown up.
Thank you for the review. You were in the right. You tried to leave a constructive criticism of why the story didn't work for you, while the author just threw a temper tantrum and went on a personal attack. Based on the author's personality, I don't think he will ever improve on his writing or in anything he does in life.
Aeternabilis:My god calling me stupid? Calm tf down. When did I say he would be op? I never mentioned this at all. The spear isn't op. In the fate verse, there are TONS of people WAY stronger than the spear. It is strong and versatile, yeah but it isn't anywhere near op for that verse. It is strong, yeah I agree. He can defeat a fair few, but he would still have to build it up like I mentioned so at the start it wouldn't even be that strong. So get the fck out here saying sht like that. Second? I can't even comment cause you know what is going to happen. All I can go off of is what is written. This is what I have done and I have clearly explained my reasoning. If you don't like that fine. Say the reasoning for why is later. If you carry on reading then it will make sense. Not go crying saying your too lazy to explain and that you don't care. I have clearly and in detail explained my thoughts on the story. You can take it how you want. Use it to help you, ignore it because it doesn't. Others can use it to help them if decide if they want to give the story a go. Calling me an idiot, a retard, wuxia fan is just pure childish. Then coming back 10 hours later to comment again on how you don't care... clearly you do. I have no words for this. So yeah gl on your story and try to be a bit more grown up.