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Review Detail of Derek_Morales in One Piece: Rise of Achilles (One Piece Fanfiction)

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Derek_Morales
Derek_MoralesLv141yrDerek_Morales

It's a great start to a story. Good grammar and a few mistakes, but nothing that takes away from the story. It has great potential to be one of the best one piece fanfics out there. Keep up the good work.

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One Piece: Rise of Achilles (One Piece Fanfiction)

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MrNoBody
MrNoBodyLv13MrNoBody

You should know the Author's record of novel before read this novel. The author is known for its incomplete, short , and rewriteable novel. This book might have a potential, but its just a potential if Author don't stay true to it/ dropped just like the others novel.

Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

He also, most of the time, make bad choice for the Harem, making people keep asking him to add some wifu. I think it's also one of the reason he drop them xD.

MrNoBody:You should know the Author's record of novel before read this novel. The author is known for its incomplete, short , and rewriteable novel. This book might have a potential, but its just a potential if Author don't stay true to it/ dropped just like the others novel.