It's a great start to a story. Good grammar and a few mistakes, but nothing that takes away from the story. It has great potential to be one of the best one piece fanfics out there. Keep up the good work.
ArifuretaForever
Liked it!
LIKEHe also, most of the time, make bad choice for the Harem, making people keep asking him to add some wifu. I think it's also one of the reason he drop them xD.
MrNoBody:You should know the Author's record of novel before read this novel. The author is known for its incomplete, short , and rewriteable novel. This book might have a potential, but its just a potential if Author don't stay true to it/ dropped just like the others novel.