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Derek_Morales

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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales18d
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    when are you updating on patre0n

    Ch 47 Chapter 47 Meeting The Press
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    Marvel: Tech System
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales3mth
    Commented

    I mean, it's only like a hundred words, so you can't really call it a story. But it's well written.

    Ch 1 Death
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    Teen wolf with X genes
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales3mth
    Commented

    I tried finding your patre0n but I couldn't it.

    Ch 60 Destroyer vs Limitless
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    I Stream DC on Marvel
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales5mth
    Posted

    It's a good story so far, but if you can write with more details and write longer chapters, it would become a great story.

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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales7mth
    Commented

    so is there a chapter today?

    Ch 29 Chapter 30):
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales7mth
    Commented

    Why not make a [pat-reon]? I mean, I don't have a PayPal account, so I never donated to you because I don't want to create a PayPal account just to donate to a single author. But I support several authors on [pat-reon], and I'd be willing to support you on it as well.

    Ch 29 Update!
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales8mth
    Commented

    Author, you need to work on your use of he/his and she/her. In one paragraph, you are using "he" while talking about Mc. In the next paragraph, you are using she. And it's not just Mc but a lot of characters, and it makes it hard to read and enjoy the story.

    Ch 134 Snape's retirement?
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    The Fifth House: Galegold
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales8mth
    Commented

    So for the patreo,n thing, make sure you make a statement that they are donating to you for appreciation as an author so that you can continue your writing. And that you are NOT SELLING the advanced chapters to your Marvel story or any of your future story those copyrights do not belong to you, and that all characters of marvel and any other characters you use belong to their respective authors. And that you are not writing this story of monetary gain but for only entertainment purposes.

    Ch 15 Update & Poll (Will Delete Later)
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    Marvel: King of Winter
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales8mth
    Commented

    So, are you going to post extra chapters today or create a patreo-n? or are you only going to use cash-ap

    Ch 14 Chapter 14):
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales8mth
    Commented

    I don't have cash app way don't you make a patreo-n?

    Ch 14 Mass Release!
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales8mth
    Commented

    Do Rose from the guild. You can make it so they meet and interact with each other when he meets the xenos and start working with the guild

    Ch 25 Chapter 25
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    Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales8mth
    Posted

    Great start. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story.

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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales9mth
    Commented

    Flash name is Barry Allen. Wally West is the Kid Flash

    Ch 30 Pictures
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    Celebrity System In The DC Universe
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales9mth
    Commented

    what's your patre on username

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: B-Rank Mission
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    Naruto Online: The Strongest Shinobi
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales9mth
    Posted

    It's a good world building and character building story. over all a great, well written danmachi story.

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    Danmachi: Rise of The Rampart
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales9mth
    Commented

    you could start a patreon if you need extra cash

    Ch 3 an
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    Reincarnated into Twilight
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales1yr
    Posted

    It's a good start to a story with good, if not great, potential. As the MC develops, I hope the author doesn't forget to develop some romance because, let's be honest, we all have our waifus we want to have. Now I'm NOT saying make a harem, but we all want a life partner, be it in reality or in a story. Again, I'm not saying write R 18 scene. Just show he has people he cares for on more than just a childish level, like it was my favorite anime character.

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    One piece : voyager
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales1yr
    Commented

    If he is using his night disciples to create darkness in order to fight with his puppets, he can be called SHADOW GENERAL, TWILIGHT GENERAL, GHOST GENERAL, or GENERAL OF NIGHT or what ever you like

    Ch 61 1 and a half years passed. (1)
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    Fairy tail: Magic General
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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales1yr
    Replied to hinojosaiii

    That's just the authors notes, tho. They aren't copying pieces of the story, so what's the problem.

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  • Derek_Morales
    Derek_Morales1yr
    Posted

    Plagiarism: the practice of taking someone else's work or ideas and passing them off as one's own. That is the definition of plagiarism, the Author said he had inspiration from other fan fics. Meaning he implied that not all of his fan fic were his own ideas. Which makes it no different than any other fan fics. So stop crying, and if you have problem suck it up. No one can legally profit from fanfics without having copyright issues crop up and a potential lawsuit from the original author. Again, these are fanfics they are met for enjoyment only. If you're complaining about credit, just write the authors/novels that gave you inspiration.

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