I put five stars just because there is no devil fruit and the MC is not a swordsman. I'm tired of One Piece fanfiction with the same fruits or swordsmen. The situation is especially sad with hand-to-hand combat, they eat mythical zoans in 90% of cases. It's sad when there is a Garp who was on equal footing with Roger. For some reason, I have not seen more than one fanfiction where the powers from the Anime and Manga "Toriko" were used, One Piece is the perfect world for the power that depends on food.

Is this inspired by Sinbad from Magi?Havent read it yet though, the harem please tone it down though no need for execessive harem

Story is decent but not a fan of a bunch of OCs, especially in the MC’s crew. There are so many One Piece characters to choose from that it makes no sense. Also, the MC is not unique since other Fate characters are also in this story and other anime like Danmachi. Not a fan of other anime characters also in One Piece... not counting the MC.

Hope you actually complete this story and you have my support till the end for I love your writing style and world building

I don’t have patiencet right now I’ll keep this quick and simple all he’s doing is taking luffys place with 2 OC’s not worth the read also grammer needs work

nice

Man it's your best story so far pls don't drop it. I wanna see it's end.

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Great story please update, so will fluffy and his adventures still happen, just without robin, and can you add bea Hancock to the harem [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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