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Derek_Morales
Derek_MoralesLv142yr
2022-12-25 07:34

It's a great start to a story. Good grammar and a few mistakes, but nothing that takes away from the story. It has great potential to be one of the best one piece fanfics out there. Keep up the good work.

One Piece: Rise of Achilles (One Piece Fanfiction)

ArifuretaForever
4.6
19 Chs

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MrNoBody
MrNoBodyLv13

You should know the Author's record of novel before read this novel. The author is known for its incomplete, short , and rewriteable novel. This book might have a potential, but its just a potential if Author don't stay true to it/ dropped just like the others novel.

2yr
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Ryofu
RyofuLv11

He also, most of the time, make bad choice for the Harem, making people keep asking him to add some wifu. I think it's also one of the reason he drop them xD.

MrNoBody:You should know the Author's record of novel before read this novel. The author is known for its incomplete, short , and rewriteable novel. This book might have a potential, but its just a potential if Author don't stay true to it/ dropped just like the others novel.
2yr
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Flaiver
FlaiverLv4

I put five stars just because there is no devil fruit and the MC is not a swordsman. I'm tired of One Piece fanfiction with the same fruits or swordsmen. The situation is especially sad with hand-to-hand combat, they eat mythical zoans in 90% of cases. It's sad when there is a Garp who was on equal footing with Roger. For some reason, I have not seen more than one fanfiction where the powers from the Anime and Manga "Toriko" were used, One Piece is the perfect world for the power that depends on food.

1yr

trueidiocy_577
trueidiocy_577Lv4

Is this inspired by Sinbad from Magi?Havent read it yet though, the harem please tone it down though no need for execessive harem

2yr
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Story is decent but not a fan of a bunch of OCs, especially in the MC’s crew. There are so many One Piece characters to choose from that it makes no sense. Also, the MC is not unique since other Fate characters are also in this story and other anime like Danmachi. Not a fan of other anime characters also in One Piece... not counting the MC.

1yr
Jeet_Chattopadhyay
Jeet_ChattopadhyayLv4

Hope you actually complete this story and you have my support till the end for I love your writing style and world building

1yr
Ryughaa
RyughaaLv14

I don’t have patiencet right now I’ll keep this quick and simple all he’s doing is taking luffys place with 2 OC’s not worth the read also grammer needs work

1yr
WintyLP
WintyLPLv1

nice

1yr
I_am_truck_kun
I_am_truck_kunLv13

Man it's your best story so far pls don't drop it. I wanna see it's end.

1yr
Alex081904
Alex081904Lv14

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1yr
Joshua2624
Joshua2624Lv1

Great story please update, so will fluffy and his adventures still happen, just without robin, and can you add bea Hancock to the harem [img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
Daoist979020
Daoist979020Lv1

Terus semangat untuk menulis novel nya jangan patah semangat dari orang yang menjelekkan novel anda kerena lebih susah membuat karya dari pada menilai karya orang lain

2yr
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