DWMR2026

Thanks for the feedback I'll pick up the pace of the story going forward but I've already scheduled the release of several chapters and I don't have time to edit or change them so I'm not going to burn myself out trying to. But in the next Arc there will be a lot of fight scenes and kingdom building. so look forward to it and thanks for reading.

The last prologue has his wishes and powers explained in detail.

Ya I get take but your choice for the soulmate is just weird. Allison, Lydia both turn 17 in season 1. Hell, a few episodes after her first appears Malia Tate turns 18, Cora Hale, Derek's younger sister is 17 when she first appears. Your MC is 20 and you choose a near 40 year old to be his soulmate? You could have made another normal OC his age that gets dragged into the supernatural world because of him for a weakness.

I was enjoying it so far until you started doing that one sided soulmate thing it just killed my interest.

A well-written story that blends Star Wars and Game of Thrones in a surprisingly cohesive way. While not perfect, it respects the logic of both universes and maintains a solid narrative flow. The crossover feels natural, and the storytelling does a great job of merging the two worlds thoughtfully.

I'm really enjoying your story

Where's the next chapter !!!!!

The writing and character development are well thought out, with the story showing great potential. The grammar and overall flow are smooth, making it an enjoyable read. I'm excited to see what the author has in store as the story progresses.

Deep down, everyone wants a loving family, so that point doesn't need to be pointed out. The problem is that MC has 2 lives with abandonment trauma. This makes their views on life and relationships simple to predict. They will either clingy to the first person or group that show him affection and acceptance, or they will self sabotage every future relationship they have going forward in life because they believe they do NOT deserve to be love, until they gets professional help. The first opinion can lead to 2 out come. Firstly, he finds people who truly care about them and all is well. The second is, unfortunately, the most common outcome, and that is, they cling to toxic individuals. Usually, because they confuse lust and sexual attraction to love and acceptance. They stay in these toxic relationships because after being abandoned and finding someone who wants them, they find it nearly impossible to leave said relationships where confuse love with lust. Which unfortunately usually leads to abuse.

It's forced because, statistically, those who have parental abandonment trauma like MC react in two-ways. They either self sabotage any future parental relationship (in-laws usually) or any relationship in general, believing something is wrong with them and that they don't deserve to be loved. Or they cling to the first person or group that show them any affection. Which is Rosalie and her family. This is fine when the person they are clingy to are good people, but when they aren't, it ends very badly for them. As they usually get an impulse it seek their approval so they are not abandoned again, and I don't have to explain how toxic of a relationship that quickly becomes.