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This story is a complete dissappointment. It started really good, with a diferent aproach from other stories and an interesting mc. The mc is a reincarnated person with a cheat ability that lets him master his spells faster. We also learn that he had an interesting time at Hogwarts while studying, as he had to defeat the whole of Slithering while there. At this point I was thinking, well, this character seems to be proactive and have some backbone. Man, was mistaken! Soon I discovered that I was pretty much the opposite... As the story starts and one reads some chapters, some things start to become clear. The story follows canon events but for some reason the author doesn't want this mc to interfere with them, and does something that should not be done. He totally nerfs the mc and turns him into a complete incompetent whenever such events take place, so that he doesn't change anything. The future knowledge that he has as a reincarnator doesn't seem to work well with the author's plans and therefore such knowledge dissapears and the mc doesn't remember even the most obvious of the events in canon. Therefore we often see him stumbling around wrong assumptions all the time... Then something worse happens and suddenly the mc no longer has any drive to do anything, or any objective, or any mission/plan/etc. Nope. He gets relegated to a secondary role in the story whose only purpose is to help a little bit the golden trio, and nothing more. And from this point onwards he started to appear less and less in the story, and the golden trio started to appear more and more. Specially Hermione. There are many chapters that are entirely from her POV. In the end I can no longer say that the mc of this story is Felix, as the author turned him into someone completely useless and does nothing important in the story. But most of all, because Hermione and the golden trio appear a lot more in the story than Felix himself! As for plot advancement there is almost none. Many chapters are filled with irrelevant information that serves no purpose. Other chapters are simply flashbacks of the begining of the story that simply repeat what has already been said. Simply put, there are a lot of useless chapters that can be ignored completely.
Harry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)
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VermaWyrda:even if he only this amount of knowledge HE SHOULD BE AWARE OF THE BOOK BEING A HORCRUX TO VOLDEMORT...... ITS THE ENTIRE PREMISE OF MOVIE 2 NOT TO MENTION ITS THE ENTIRE POINT OF MOVIE 7 AND THE HUNT THEY HAVE FOR IT, you can not in good conscious say that he doesnt know of it and another fact is that if he has such limited knowledge HOW does he KNOW about all the people then..... HE SHOULDNT KNOW OF THEM EITHER im dropping this
even if he only this amount of knowledge HE SHOULD BE AWARE OF THE BOOK BEING A HORCRUX TO VOLDEMORT...... ITS THE ENTIRE PREMISE OF MOVIE 2 NOT TO MENTION ITS THE ENTIRE POINT OF MOVIE 7 AND THE HUNT THEY HAVE FOR IT, you can not in good conscious say that he doesnt know of it and another fact is that if he has such limited knowledge HOW does he KNOW about all the people then..... HE SHOULDNT KNOW OF THEM EITHER im dropping this
Crazy_DarkSide_Cat:Mc didn't read HP book or watched Hp Film, he only watched some famous clips from internet in his previous life.( so he only knows some basic Hp gossips and some scenes)[img=recommend]
Man thanks for the save lol, if I wanted to read Harry Potter again I'd read the book rather than waste time on this if the canon doesn't really change. And if u want a harry potter fic, try searching for something about a Harry Potter that survived the apocalypse that Voldemort brought by launching nukes in his world, and after finally finding Voldemort in the middle of a ritual he kills him; and in the process of doing that he gets transported in the beaches of Malibu and then later gets to know an agent named Phil Coulson.
I didn't know that until I just read this, though my opinion on this probably doesn't matter considering I've never seen a single Harry Potter movie or read any of the books about it, my knowledge about Harry Potter stuff being limited to the few chapters of some random fanfics that I've read which more often than not were probably complete AU's and therefore providing me with close to no actual knowledge on the series itself, though honestly they might have just completely copied the originals plot and I'd of had no clue either way, so any information I have about the Harry Potter series is either heavily changed or just plain wrong.
VermaWyrda:even if he only this amount of knowledge HE SHOULD BE AWARE OF THE BOOK BEING A HORCRUX TO VOLDEMORT...... ITS THE ENTIRE PREMISE OF MOVIE 2 NOT TO MENTION ITS THE ENTIRE POINT OF MOVIE 7 AND THE HUNT THEY HAVE FOR IT, you can not in good conscious say that he doesnt know of it and another fact is that if he has such limited knowledge HOW does he KNOW about all the people then..... HE SHOULDNT KNOW OF THEM EITHER im dropping this
Crazy_DarkSide_Cat:Mc didn't read HP book or watched Hp Film, he only watched some famous clips from internet in his previous life.( so he only knows some basic Hp gossips and some scenes)[img=recommend]
Crazy_DarkSide_Cat:Mc didn't read HP book or watched Hp Film, he only watched some famous clips from internet in his previous life.( so he only knows some basic Hp gossips and some scenes)[img=recommend]
10%? you are a very positive person... I would go 1% because CN has a lot of racism and heavy nationalism... even the ones that don't have it are dropped because readers complain a lot about not being nationalist...
Ballad:I'm hesitant CN novels are 90% always trash with the last 10% actually being good
ratuzin:10%? you are a very positive person... I would go 1% because CN has a lot of racism and heavy nationalism... even the ones that don't have it are dropped because readers complain a lot about not being nationalist...