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Carlos_Balbizan

Carlos_Balbizan

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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan5mth
    Replied to Peryite
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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan5mth
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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan5mth
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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan5mth
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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan5mth
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    [img=faceslap]

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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan5mth
    Replied to Peryite

    s2 man...

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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan5mth
    Replied to Peryite

    do you have any iq? honestly man... just read it. If that's what you think, I'm not going to make an effort to change the opinion of someone irrelevant to my life on the other side of the planet

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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan5mth
    Replied to Peryite

    I don't know if you understood... but it was a sarcastic comment. like, just reread

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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan7mth
    Posted

    It would be a good story if there really was a sense of protagonism. Splitting the POVs by centering other people's point of view to take up more than 80% of the story is disastrous... No need for other people's POVs when this can be solved simply with third person POV, the author seems to want merge the concept of a novel with something like a book or movie, where there is not really a centralization of the characters in most cases. At least that's the point of view of someone who wouldn't even be able to identify the protagonist if the first 3 chapters are removed...

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    Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
    TV · Chill_ean_GUY
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan7mth
    Commented

    I really don't understand the reason to completely abandon the depth of the characters when switching POVs between them... a third-person POV is more than enough to explain external events

    Robert Baratheon POV
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    Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
    TV · Chill_ean_GUY
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan7mth
    Posted

    it's so frustrating it hurts... i've tried to get back to reading it after more than 6 months but it's impossible to read this...it's just not my taste. (Tag something relating to "hurt", "anguish", "suspense") My anxiety just keeps me from reading this in a way I can't explain, but well... the overall development sucks the only thing that saves the score for me is the impeccable quality of the writing, because otherwise... it even gives me physical pain

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    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan7mth
    Replied to Sinning_Sovereign

    explained, explained... and in the end, he didn't explain a damn thing...

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    Heaven’s Gene Path: Super Gene
    Anime & Comics · Sinning_Sovereign
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan7mth
    Commented

    Nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! I love your recommendations

    *Also, I'm getting pretty tired of Harry Potter Fanfic's. So I'm probably going to stop reading and recommending them*
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    Fanfiction Recommendations
    Anime & Comics · Monsterb620
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan9mth
    Posted

    <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<when in rome, do as the romans do>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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    Alexander Creed: Re-Life
    Celebrities · UniVerseLessOne
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan9mth
    Posted

    tag missing (drama). In general, this story is forced and repetitive, in addition to the fact that the protagonists are not forcibly developed in the prologue for a reason (10 chapters of something that should be changeable, and bring mystery to the story, even allowing the "withdrawal of abilities from the ass ")... I don't see a way for such a protagonist to survive the games beyond the exaggerated "plot armor", because he has nothing unique... well, I read until the last chapter released so far and I stand by the same words for the rest of the story, in addition to adding a "system" that is basically useless, the mc's personality is inconsistent and meaningless, like someone with some severe mental illness and not someone with depression

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    The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland
    Movies · SrCuervo
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan10mth
    Commented

    just a genius lol

    Summary: This story takes the trope/cliche of Harry Potter working out to become a fitness buff to its logical and completely ridiculous endgame. Now it's time to meet Beefcake Harry, Dudebro supreme. Also starring his mentor, a great big buff guy... named Thanos. And stoner Dumbledore, because why not?
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    Anime & Comics · Monsterb620
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan10mth
    Commented

    drop...

    [Kaia POV]
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    Reborn in My Hero Academia as a Demon Slayer.
    Anime & Comics · ZackDKaizo
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  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan10mth
    Replied to Fluffy_Menace

    (I used the translator, English is far from being a common language in my case) but the quality of the story "split" in the last "plot", seems not to have been written by the same author...

    This book has been deleted.
  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan10mth
    Commented

    the authenticity of the story seems to start to diverge in this last "plot", because even the "peculiarity test" there was still coherence... something that has long been lost

    This book has been deleted.
  • Carlos_Balbizan
    Carlos_Balbizan10mth
    Commented

    the authenticity of the story seems to start to diverge in this last "plot", because even the "peculiarity test" there was still coherence... something that has long been lost

    This book has been deleted.