Review Detail of Virtual_Insanity in Magic of Craetion

As the author I figure it would be pretty shameless to write a five star review of my own work so I'm just gonna put it at 4 stars... :D Seriously though I this review is basically meaningless so just read the first chapter and make your mind up whether you find it interesting or not. ALSO, if you do think it's bad please write it in a comment or review (preferably with a reason why you think it sucks). At least that way I can try to improve my writing style. Aight, nuff said.