TLDR: Writing Quality - 2 stars because it's in English, just barely. Everything Else - 3 stars because I can't focus on these aspects due to the above I've not read much of this book but that isn't because I dislike the premise or any other issue with the idea behind the book. The reason I can't read this is because the grammar is just awful, the mistakes are frequent and VERY noticeable. Just reading the synopsis should let you know what kind of grammar your in for with this "most strongest" of books. I'll come back and give this book another chance once the basic grammar issues have been fixed but until then I will avoid this like the plague.

As the author I figure it would be pretty shameless to write a five star review of my own work so I'm just gonna put it at 4 stars... :D Seriously though I this review is basically meaningless so just read the first chapter and make your mind up whether you find it interesting or not. ALSO, if you do think it's bad please write it in a comment or review (preferably with a reason why you think it sucks). At least that way I can try to improve my writing style. Aight, nuff said.

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