Review Detail of KuramaTobi in Reincarnated in Legacies as a Dark Fey
Review detail
The writing is really bad, It try’s to be something good but the author just can’t do it. There are parts that just don’t make sense; or really unclear pov’s and character dialogue. The Harry Potter spells kinda ruined it for me, It just doesn’t fit in smoothly. Interactions between mc and love interest is really poorly written too, so be aware of that.
Reincarnated in Legacies as a Dark Fey
Just_for_fun1997
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Not sure if you’ve gotten your editing predictament situated yet but if not contact me via email and maybe I could fix your problem. Rexwenb4@gmail.com
Just_for_fun1997:English is not my first language and I don't have many friends to help with editing.
Honestly nothing a little editing and preparation can’t fix. I love unique ff ideas, and this one is an amazing idea, it’s just difficult to read.
Just_for_fun1997:Understandable and thank you for reading.
KuramaTobi:Honestly nothing a little editing and preparation can’t fix. I love unique ff ideas, and this one is an amazing idea, it’s just difficult to read.
man, just use one grammarly. it will help immensely... the conversations, then it would be nice if you could attend some classes
Just_for_fun1997:English is not my first language and I don't have many friends to help with editing.
Just_for_fun1997:English is not my first language and I don't have many friends to help with editing.