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KuramaTobi
KuramaTobiLv153yr
2021-10-14 03:50

The writing is really bad, It try’s to be something good but the author just can’t do it. There are parts that just don’t make sense; or really unclear pov’s and character dialogue. The Harry Potter spells kinda ruined it for me, It just doesn’t fit in smoothly. Interactions between mc and love interest is really poorly written too, so be aware of that.

Reincarnated in Legacies as a Dark Fey

Just_for_fun1997
4.5
114 Chs

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Just_for_fun1997
Just_for_fun1997Author

Understandable and thank you for reading.

3yr
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KuramaTobi
KuramaTobiLv15

Honestly nothing a little editing and preparation can’t fix. I love unique ff ideas, and this one is an amazing idea, it’s just difficult to read.

Just_for_fun1997:Understandable and thank you for reading.
3yr
10
Just_for_fun1997
Just_for_fun1997Author

English is not my first language and I don't have many friends to help with editing.

KuramaTobi:Honestly nothing a little editing and preparation can’t fix. I love unique ff ideas, and this one is an amazing idea, it’s just difficult to read.
3yr
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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

man, just use one grammarly. it will help immensely... the conversations, then it would be nice if you could attend some classes

Just_for_fun1997:English is not my first language and I don't have many friends to help with editing.
3yr
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kkkking
kkkkingLv3

you could try looking for one on reddit

Just_for_fun1997:English is not my first language and I don't have many friends to help with editing.
3yr
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CustomFireblast
CustomFireblastLv14

Really good so far. love how he doesn't know what's gonna happen and he seems smart and prevented Hope's Heart break. Can't wait for him to meet Klaus.

3yr

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

like all, writing and conversation need a quick editor... like all your stories, writing starts off average and gets worse along the way. (ps: can you answer me why do you have an account that every week correctly floda emojis with 5 stars?, for me it looks like a secondary account improving your rating. his name is @daoist571053)

3yr
blooom
blooomLv15

This is great 👍 can’t wait to see more !!!!!!! There is not many great tvd/to in Webnovel .I hope that you don’t drop cause I am really liking it .

3yr
unknown_daoist
unknown_daoistLv14

I always hated the argument "english isnt my first language", it isnt mine either and i can still write on an understandable level...furthermore there are plenty of free websites/programms to help on with the grammar :/ To the Story: i kinda dislike that there are a lot of unlogical plotholes and that some of the original character act totally different to their "series-selves" for example: Klaus is too understanding as a father and doesnt get his common trust issues etc. with mc...

3yr
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readtokilltime
readtokilltimeLv14

what is a Darl Fey? Also what is Legacies ? -------------------------‐—:':-)-7-)':':4)-.-.':3:?)?.-)-:-)??.-.-)-:-.-.-)-:-:-)-:---.-.-)?:?)?.-.-

3yr
Chibixx
ChibixxLv3

This is amazing. Best original/vampire diaries fan fic on this site or that I have read. I NEED MOARRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A+A+A+A+A+A+A+

3yr
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Completely ruined your own story when the MC started teaching Hope his spells.

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Daoist571053
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