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unknown_daoist
unknown_daoistLv142yr
2022-01-07 23:10

I always hated the argument "english isnt my first language", it isnt mine either and i can still write on an understandable level...furthermore there are plenty of free websites/programms to help on with the grammar :/ To the Story: i kinda dislike that there are a lot of unlogical plotholes and that some of the original character act totally different to their "series-selves" for example: Klaus is too understanding as a father and doesnt get his common trust issues etc. with mc...

Reincarnated in Legacies as a Dark Fey

Just_for_fun1997
4.5
114 Chs

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Just_for_fun1997
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no problem

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CustomFireblast
CustomFireblastLv14

Really good so far. love how he doesn't know what's gonna happen and he seems smart and prevented Hope's Heart break. Can't wait for him to meet Klaus.

3yr

KuramaTobi
KuramaTobiLv15

The writing is really bad, It try’s to be something good but the author just can’t do it. There are parts that just don’t make sense; or really unclear pov’s and character dialogue. The Harry Potter spells kinda ruined it for me, It just doesn’t fit in smoothly. Interactions between mc and love interest is really poorly written too, so be aware of that.

3yr
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

like all, writing and conversation need a quick editor... like all your stories, writing starts off average and gets worse along the way. (ps: can you answer me why do you have an account that every week correctly floda emojis with 5 stars?, for me it looks like a secondary account improving your rating. his name is @daoist571053)

3yr
blooom
blooomLv15

This is great 👍 can’t wait to see more !!!!!!! There is not many great tvd/to in Webnovel .I hope that you don’t drop cause I am really liking it .

3yr
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Amazing 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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readtokilltime
readtokilltimeLv13

what is a Darl Fey? Also what is Legacies ? -------------------------‐—:':-)-7-)':':4)-.-.':3:?)?.-)-:-)??.-.-)-:-.-.-)-:-:-)-:---.-.-)?:?)?.-.-

3yr
Chibixx
ChibixxLv3

This is amazing. Best original/vampire diaries fan fic on this site or that I have read. I NEED MOARRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A+A+A+A+A+A+A+

3yr
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Completely ruined your own story when the MC started teaching Hope his spells.

1yr
Daoist571053
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