this novel is pretty good and so far the only thing I can say that in my opinion is a turn-off is how bad the grammar is in the unedited chapters. the first 30 chapters are pretty good because the author went back through and jiri edited them so they read pretty well however at least for me I'm not going to continue reading this book until her there are more edited chapters for the sole reason that I kind of can't stick through it because of the grammar. But that's just it it's only the language that's an issue there is no problem with the story and the characters are very well written, and there's a lot of world background. I highly recommend this book and I'm probably going to be pumping it with some power stones and some golden tickets if I have any because the other stories I read a pretty much top novels and this one seems to be flying under a lot of people's radar so good work author keep it up please keep editing the beginning chapters though I don't know if it gets any better I just know that I stopped reading I think right before I went premium just because I couldn't really bear with it when it came to the quality
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