This is really good. no problem with grammar, the story pulls you in, and the MC is very interesting, can hardly wait for next update.....................

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I never drop reviews, rarely even, but I have to say, just don't drop. Please🙏. This is hands down the best ATG fanfic I've read

In what way is this average young master? Don't you know the meaning of average? Fine he hid his cultivation but all the bigshot and his harem knows his true cultivation so whats the point of hiding it? Just to face slap some younger gen cultivator? What a misleading title hence the low rating

I regret reading all the advance chapters in discord. Now, I need to wait for more. Fu##!!!!!!!!!!! As always, Author create another amazing stories. Pls. Dont drop

Writing quality is good except for a few wrong grammar and spelling. Idk anything about the updates Story development is like slice of life a little too slow to my liking Hated the MC's naive way of thinking and showing all of his secrets except for the system. Imagine not leaving a trump card for yourself and just bare it all for others to see World background is just ATG

Maybe this is an ATG fanfic with a slice of life where the storyline is relaxed and it's so relaxed that you get tired of reading it. So far his strength development is quite different from the OG version of his own ATG which is to increase strength through diligent cultivation and inheritance. Whereas this uses an enhancement method from another xianxia world that is using pills. so much explanation thank you.

Excellent story with great writing quality and world background not to mention the consistent update, The character design and the way you present their emotions and thoughts are quite entertaining and life-like not to mention how the main characters unique thought process has led to him being able to make world changing pills and artifacts with simple items or even mixing separate fields such as alchemy and runes. Overall the story is amazing and I am sure as the plot progresses into the higher realms the quality of the story will only continue to improve with Xiao Long gaining access to new materials and legacies

The story is very entertaining and relaxed. It could be said that it focuses more on how the MC develops more of his abilities and how he uses them to break the common sense of the world in which he finds himself. But you can understand why, the MC thinks outside the box and doesn't focus on increasing his strength with the already established methods. The "how can I improve certain aspects of cultivation" is always present, be it with alchemy, matrices, etc. I especially liked that he is realizing the importance of the energy that everyone uses to cultivate, he understands that it is moldable, it can have different attributes, present in everything. Basically, he's achieving "The Dao Of Profound Energy" hehe. The harem could be said to be a secondary bonus, it's not that relevant apart from getting girls (Pokemon), but I really like the interactions he has with his wife and the occasional girl. Especially, the point of view of the girls means that they are not just decorative vases, with this it is understood that they exist and have personality. I recommend improving the interactions with the other characters, since the novel could become a monologue of the MC. Of course not everyone wants chapters with unimportant dialogue, but at the same time it gives the other characters an authentic flavor. For example, I like the MC's first wife, her inner thoughts of being jealous of her or her acting spoiled is nice. I'm not an author, so not how hard it is to make those small changes. But you can say that this fan-fic has potential, so the author should take his time and decide if it is feasible to achieve them and not go against what he seeks to convey in this fan-fic. You can't have the best of both worlds. So I'll see where this fan-fic goes.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]