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Crazy_Cronie_1
Crazy_Cronie_1Lv53yr
2021-09-01 22:16

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 01/09/2021 @chap 211 (released chap till date: 219) review divided in: Short review Long review with ratings CC rants. Conclusion SHORT REVIEW: A slow paced SOLish where mc accepts disciples with some action & comedy. LONG REVIEW: writing: 9/10 Lil typo mistakes but not to the point where it hinders your reading experience... at least I didn't have any prob. update: 10+2/10 Yeah, deserves more than the max rating... For me 7 ch/week is must for full rating for any original novels and this one releases more than 7 plot: 7/10 ^ Don't get me wrong for the low ratings... There is nothing wrong with the story... The world is being slowly introduced to us which is something I really enjoy ^ the story is well connected and till now there is no plothole (nothing caught my eyes atleast.) ^ But the low rating of this section is because author-chan it seems you forgot the title~ I mean *spoiler* it has been almost 150 chaps he din get any Disciple. *spoiler end* ^ the system hasn't been really explained... Tho it might be done in the future.. for now i dont have any idea I mean till now I thought it's only related to disciples but suddenly we get different side missions *spoiler* about finding the core of the secret realm and then a survival quest. *spoiler end* ... characters: 8.5/10 Nothing bad... Most characters have their own quirk, but still characters could have been given a little more depth. Till now tho it's good. pacing: 9/10 ^ This is a slow paced novel. And it's really enjoyable reading this... ^ -1 maybe because i feel a little increase in pace would do good? Just my opinion dialogues: 9.5/10 Author did a good job here. People conversing here is one of the things most likeable about this novel. entertainment: 9/10 Welp this is a biased rating since it totally depends upon how much I enjoyed... Overall: 4.5/5 CC rants:- ^ Well, first of all I should correct my previous review. This isn't similar to History's no. 1 founder in anyway..... This one leans more towards SOL compared to HN1F which is action packed. ^ Secondly this is for ya author-chan~ It's high time we have a disciple xD... ^ Also high time MC breakthrough next realm.... ^ This is for the readers... MC is little intelligent compared to other novels so you won't get irritated by his dumbness.. ^ And well... nothing else keep updating 🌚 CONCLUSION: This is one of my weekly pastime... I just stack chaps to read it every weekend... And a must read if you're into SOL type novels... I'll say it once again; there is no romance, harem so to all suckers for this genre stay away... (I'm a sucker for harem and this is one of the few novels I'm reading which doesn't have harem)

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PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthor

Thanks for review! I just began refocusing on the disciple and system again recently as I felt that it was left too much to the side during volume 2... So expect them to be at the center point in the soon to be future! That aside, you are within 4 or so chapters of volume 3... xD

shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1

another sucker for harem here....2 questions/requests: 1. What is SOL?? 2. Give me some good and I mean really good harem recommendations, brother.

Immortal_Panda
Immortal_PandaLv14

Is there a romance in this or harem?

PurpleSpring:Thanks for review! I just began refocusing on the disciple and system again recently as I felt that it was left too much to the side during volume 2... So expect them to be at the center point in the soon to be future! That aside, you are within 4 or so chapters of volume 3... xD
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PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthor

plan to have romance in it, no harem.

Immortal_Panda:Is there a romance in this or harem?
Immortal_Panda
Immortal_PandaLv14

Thanks 👍

PurpleSpring:plan to have romance in it, no harem.
NormL
NormLLv3

I'm pretty sure that SOL means slice of life.

shashank_panthri:another sucker for harem here....2 questions/requests: 1. What is SOL?? 2. Give me some good and I mean really good harem recommendations, brother.
shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1

oh...thanks.

NormL:I'm pretty sure that SOL means slice of life.
Rascal_7777
Rascal_7777Lv11

Is there romance on the existing chaps or later?

PurpleSpring:plan to have romance in it, no harem.
PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthor

not for main charater, will be at some point later.

Rascal_7777:Is there romance on the existing chaps or later?
Nale_Sheeeeeee
Nale_SheeeeeeeLv4

Yis. (I'm a sucker for both so...)

PurpleSpring:plan to have romance in it, no harem.
PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthor

Nale_Sheeeeeee:Yis. (I'm a sucker for both so...)
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Dartz
DartzLv12

love it! I don't like Harem to begin with..

PurpleSpring:plan to have romance in it, no harem.
CryptoCat
CryptoCatLv5

Am I missing some context or something? The MC took in a disciple in the first 20 chapters no?

Liovandur
LiovandurLv13

SOL=SLICE OF LIFE

shashank_panthri:another sucker for harem here....2 questions/requests: 1. What is SOL?? 2. Give me some good and I mean really good harem recommendations, brother.
Danni11
Danni11Lv11

Hahaha in the Spanish language SOL is what it would be sun in English :v

Liovandur:SOL=SLICE OF LIFE
Liovandur
LiovandurLv13

I know.

Danni11:Hahaha in the Spanish language SOL is what it would be sun in English :v
Dark_night1
Dark_night1Lv4

yeah, but guy disciple...

CryptoCat:Am I missing some context or something? The MC took in a disciple in the first 20 chapters no?
CCP_ARE_RETARDED
CCP_ARE_RETARDEDLv2

get gud writing stop dragging to much man

PurpleSpring:
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Dragon8992
Dragon8992Lv15

Hi author, Has the romance started for MC and from which chapter or volume? Thanks

Sebastian_Barreto
Sebastian_BarretoLv1

Harem?

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Crazy_Cronie_1
Crazy_Cronie_1Lv5

Heyo crazy cronie here, review on 29/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 27) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: Gives you 'Accept disciples and become stronger' and 'History's no one founder' vibes. AND LET ME SAY IT ONCE AGAIN, THE REVIEW IS BASED ON JUST 30 CHAPS! long review: pros: 1) Even though the story isn't original, this is still a fresh read since this ain't the type of plotline WN authors generally pick coz it's a lot more difficult. 2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro.) 3) MC is smart unlike other novels where the main trait of the mc is idiocy. No plot armour saving MC's ass, mc knows to hide, to run.... Atleast for now that's the casd 4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them. 5) Side chara gets the deserved attention. Even though still less than 30 chaps I know the author is giving them the screen time required. 6) Author interacts with the readers... Listens to their ideas, opinions and advices and uses them, a big plus compared to those who just take many criticisms and advices comments as malice.... 7) Maybe because it is new but the updates are stable.. and it is even 10 chaps a week!! Something which I love!! cons: 1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Too much info? Author sometimes give more than info dump required. (I cut my entertainment points coz of that.) 2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension as said above. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro since I was searching something like this.) 3) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Nothing can be said clearly about world. We don't exactly know where the plot is heading... But then again WE ARE JUST 30 CHAPS IN!! 4) MC doesn't have really have any ambition. Like *SPOILER* he just gets a disciple coz the system said so... The system didn't threaten him and neither it was shown that mc wanted to become really strong!! That maybe coz it's just 30 chaps and maybe revealed in the future. 5) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Easy to understand writing with little bit of typo errors and some grammatical mistakes which are negligible. IMO: - A little less info dump would be better... - A little ambitious MC would be a big plus for this novel, like creating your own clan/group/organisation... Just a lil bit of hint would be fine ... Even something like wanting to live a carefree life that's why making your disciples strong is also okay As long as my opinions doesn't spoil the plot RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (con-5) update: 9/10 (pro-7) plot: 8/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&3) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-3&5, con-4) pacing: 8.5/10 (pro-4) dialogues: 8/10 (pro-5) entertainment: 8.5/10 OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion: This novel has excellent potential! I am just worried like many other WN authors, he doesn't stop updating... I am seriously waiting for more updates:). Thanks for the chapters! If possible pin this review @PurpleSpring bruh! Next review after chap 100 WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC till now seems to be neutral. Neither hero, nor villain... Should have been anti hero but even that isn't mentioned... -

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