What can I say, this fic good in all aspects. Author have indepth research and understanding of the series. The characters shown were on point. Decisions of the MC is realistic. Though this is an AU Naruto but the story is well-made. The only problem is the stability of updates though but the rest were perfect.

Overall the story is very good, I can only find 2 real problems with it. The first one is quite basic, the author often forgets to capitalize names, titles and skills. This is a pretty minor, but it does get annoying quickly. The second issue is more nuanced, the intro was way to quick, within 2 pages he wakes up, has a system and understands it instantly and moves on quickly. This is the sort of thing that requires an extra chapter to buff out.

this is great..a very good character development..I like the way you integrated the character into the story..I got to say "THIS IS SATISFYING"

ONE OF THE BETTER MUST READ NARUTO FAN-FICTIONS!!! Just got to chapter 41 and I am officially blown away with this [canon crushing] version of Naruto! The author put a lot of blood and tears into this and it shines due to it. OK what to expect from this 1st Harem not yet he is 6 for god sake you perverts! 2nd there is only one gender-bend canon character and its Itachi [AU duh]...but it works! 3rd the reincarnate that cam with a simple system has NO memory's of his past life or any knowledge of the story at all! 4th The canon is changed!!!! The MC arrived before the nine-tails attack on the Leaf, and the Leafs history is.....well read it to find out how awesome it is!

I would just like to say... I love this book its clear and easy to read along with correct grammer. I’ll give this a 5 stars! Keep Up the work!

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you are good very good just release chapters little faster

Terimakasih untuk cerita yang luar biasa! Aku hanya berharap perjalanan mereka tidak akan membutuhkan waktu yang lama, aku cukup bisa menebak, sejak Jiraiya mengatakan bahwa Naruto akan ditempatkan di panti asuhan, Naruto akan mengalami masa kecil yang sama dengan kanon nya. Aku menunggu kelanjutan ceritanya!

It might seem like somewhat of a drag in the beginning but give it a chance and read on !! Since the MC lost his memories he is still trying to understand a lot of things and it will take sometime !! Plus canon hasn't really started yet so you will have to wait a little for major story development !!