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Darquesse
DarquesseLv63yr
2021-03-24 14:52

Overall the story is very good, I can only find 2 real problems with it. The first one is quite basic, the author often forgets to capitalize names, titles and skills. This is a pretty minor, but it does get annoying quickly. The second issue is more nuanced, the intro was way to quick, within 2 pages he wakes up, has a system and understands it instantly and moves on quickly. This is the sort of thing that requires an extra chapter to buff out.

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