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kickyx
kickyxLv133yr
2021-06-21 07:10

Honestly this wouldve been a good story if the MC wasnt a idiot. Like my guy got enslaved and abused and he just accepts it like its normal.. If it were me I would try to escape because from what I can see all her class did was bring him back to life and connect their mana, her orders can still be ignored as we have seen already, he can literally just escape and she cant do anything. The romance is honestly forced because of the above reason man, if you were going to have him be a zombie to her then at least make it so that she is originally his friend that way he wouldnt have a problem protecting her when he got revived :/ Writing Quality - 4 Stability - 3 Story Dev - 2 Character design - 2 World Background - 2

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WinnieLePooh
WinnieLePoohLv13

He can't escape tho, did you not read the first few chapters with the system forcing his death to become her eternal servant? It will just force them back.

ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11

and if she does then he dies also, and she is a character that the system is trying to kill

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EkoSun
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Gryz
GryzLv15

**Please read until the end of volume one until you decide whether to drop or not! If you can’t tolerate the drama, you will be missing out. Zombie and Cranberry’s relationship is SO MUCH better. I have privilege and I’ve bought all the chapters so far, I would know. Honestly, their dynamic relationship is my favorite part about the story!** It honestly makes me sad to see that people drop this novel after the 6th chapter. The villainess, or Cranberry, and Zombie are around SEVEN years old 6 chapters in. However, she DOES NOT act like a normal child does. Some people also missed the fact that she seems AFRAID of what her mother will do to her when she was beating Zombie. Why? It is revealed at the END of volume ONE. Trust me, you will NOT hate Cranberry. In fact, there is a character you will hate more! Writing quality: [5/5] It’s good so far. Some typos here and there, but nothing major. Would’ve put 4.5/5, but I can’t do a half star. Updating stability: [5/5] We’re given 2 chapters a day at 5AM and 5PM PST if nothing happens to the author. 2 a day is plenty already Story development: [5/5] IMO, the story is amazing. I love the direction the author is taking it and I’m hooked! Character design: [5/5] I love Zombie and Cranberry’s character and I love their development. The characters are lifelike, but their common sense is obviously different from ours because their world is different. World background: [3/5] We don’t really know a lot about the world because of Zombie’s rotten brain skill. This means that we can only learn from whatever information Cranberry gives us, if she ever does. In addition, we haven’t started the “otome game” setting yet. I’ll update this when we get there. If you have any questions, feel free to ask!

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BRACKKUSama_z
BRACKKUSama_zLv2

Look, Im just gonna be honest. Even with reading the auxillary chapter and other reviewers saying that it gets better X chapters later, I cant reccomend this one. The main point of contention with this one is the Mc. Guys seems to be a normal dude who gets isekaied via bike and shoved into a otome game before being essentialy emotionally lobotomized. I understand its because of said system but my honest question was why? Yes, you explained why it happened story-wise, but why was that character shift needed? Was it really neccessary to remove the original personality so early in the story and replace it with whatever Zombie's personality is, if you can call that a complete personality? Does that add anything to the story other then frustration and removing the voice of modern history from the story? If it was Zombie with little bits of the MC poking through every now and then, that would be acceptable.As soon as MC was killed the second time, he essentially just became another,less interesting character. If you had removed the isekai elements from the story and just had him as a basic mob in the original game, there would lose essentially nothing because for a otome game setting, there are almost no Otome game elements.You coul just call it a fantasy world and nobody would notice the diffrence. If it takes 50+ chapters to get somewhat interesting or for some development to happen, and I have to pay for the later part of those chapters, then this novel is not worth it at all. Nobody wants to buy a video game that only gets good 40hrs in. If you want someone to read your book or buy your game, then that 1st impression matters the most, and this book does not make a good one.

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