Review Detail of KiaoSuvan in QUEEN BELLATRIX MEETS EMPEROR RAVINE

Overall I think this is a good story. the beginning set-up was clear and pretty easy to understand but I can't help a feeling that the story is a bit rushed and I advise that the author should calm down and take time. I tried to rush my story to an interesting part before and regret doing so I ended up having to rework my passion project from 0. Overall I still think this is a good novel but the author really need to slow down and carefully consider the event that will unfold in the story.