Review Detail of Archonstine in One Piece: Path to Power

The original story had a solid plot, and on its merits was by far one of the best one piece fanfic I've ever read. The rewrite? It only removed the unnecessary angst from the original, but also made the progression far more realistic and fluid. The vocabulary is near perfect, with barely any grammatical errors, and near-perfect diction and syntax. And hopefully, the power scaling too will receive a much needed revamp, considering how far the manga has progressed since the original... All in all, a well-deserved 5 stars.