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Daoist351660
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2021-05-20 18:47

I absolutely despise stories that start in the middle and try to act all mysterious by not giving you any information about the mc. I hate this and I hate you for writing it.

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VeganMaster
VeganMasterAuthor

the 9th chapter is literally the entire backstory

Daoist351660
Daoist351660Lv4

the backstory should be in the first chapter idiot

VeganMaster:the 9th chapter is literally the entire backstory
VeganMaster
VeganMasterAuthor

That's not the case for most stories. You are usually supposed to learn more about him during his adventures, not in an information dump. The backstory I gave is also left vague in most places, as to be actually explored later.

Daoist351660:the backstory should be in the first chapter idiot
ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv5

I have read allot of novel (LN,WN,Manga,Manhwa and ff) not all story explains or introduces the main protagonist from very start of the story

Daoist351660:the backstory should be in the first chapter idiot
RedSidewalk
RedSidewalkLv1

✨narrow-minded✨

Mr_Babbles
Mr_BabblesLv15

bro? any good book introduces a character bit by bit, with an intro

Daoist351660:the backstory should be in the first chapter idiot
AuthoriTet
AuthoriTetLv4

loser, make your own book if you don't like it

Daoist351660:the backstory should be in the first chapter idiot
Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4

daoist351660,which dao did you comprehend,is it stupidity,lol

Ch1cken
Ch1ckenLv2

This made me chuckle, good job

Shadow_Gamer1:daoist351660,which dao did you comprehend,is it stupidity,lol
Rovontheus
RovontheusLv4

Never watch naruto 🤣 You'll probably get frustrated

Daoist351660:the backstory should be in the first chapter idiot
Chepi_1
Chepi_1Lv4

Shadow_Gamer1:daoist351660,which dao did you comprehend,is it stupidity,lol
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JohnWickCat
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it's really an interesting story for sure but disappointing enough that i couldn't say it as a good story, decent might be the best way to describe it. and what make it disappointing at least for me is mainly 2 things. the way how author try tell or describe the author original main character and how unrelatable the motivation that the mc have in make a big and important decision that literally altered all the entire HXH universe the author instead tell the story with the way "show don't tell" the author choose at early stage of his story to just laid it all of who exactly is mc is, and that's make the mystery of the mc and my curiosity of him just answered very quickly and abruptly and that make feel unsatisfied in receiving the answer. instead of creating situation where all the qualities of the mc could be shown or shined one by one, step by step which the author actually did at his early chapters but somehow instead continuing it the author choose to create a semi information dump chapter of the character and make all my curiosity just instantly gone for the mc. but still I am interest not to the mc, but to what he exactly he gonna do and then he make the decision, which is a big important decision where i personally couldn't make any sensed of it or related it or feel justified of it. because for me I couldn't see myself doing it if I placed at the position of the MC neither any justified benefit of why the mc make such a big important decision. and because of that I personally choose to stop right now reading it, at least for now. we will see.

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