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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv123yr
2021-04-04 14:09

Normally I wouldn't do a review in chapter 4, but this fanfic has so many problems that I can't help it. Grammar is ok for me, but English is not my first language so I may be wrong, but the author's writing is kind of boring and monotonous. The stability of updates is the standard of the webnovel 1 chapter per day. It is in Story development that the problems really begin: 1) the mc gets an omnisystem, which is something I really hate (why the hell fanfic authors add "omni" to everything, is it really necessary to keep declaring that the mc system is absolute?). Well this is more my personal hatred missing, it is not a real problem, just a lack of creativity and maybe the author's laziness to give a name to the system but it doesn't harm the fanfic. 2) The real problem that almost makes me grieve besides being present in all the chapters that I have read so far is that instead of mc trying (or using the system to cheat in absurd ways) the damn world is made for the convenience of mc, with a pandemic killing most men making it easy to get a harem, and the world of sham entertainment where the mc can casually copy works from the previous world. Honestly, why the hell didn't you just say that mc created a famous manga like one piece? Is there really a need to create a convenient world where he can steal works from his past life? 3) Character Desing: None. The MC is nothing special, which is even acceptable, what really hurts is that in Chapter 3 the MC has already attracted the interest of two girls without even having time to present them to the readers correctly. 4) World Background: As I said before, made for the convenience of mc. I understand that it is a little early for a review, so I will at least read through the most recent chapters and do an updated review and give the fanfic a try before dropping.

Transmigrator's Random Travels in Fictional Universes

Lazy_Author69
4.5
80 Chs

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Lazy_Author69
Lazy_Author69Author

Ahaha, Actually all of what you said is right. Especially about the world being convenient for him. And there's a reason for that, although I can't really tell now. Anyway I don't really blame you if you drop since I know this novel as so many problems but I still enjoy writing it so I can't really stop. Anyway thanks for the review😁😁😊

3yr
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Itz_lord
Itz_lordLv13

dude that was so wholesome I think I about to cry

Lazy_Author69:Ahaha, Actually all of what you said is right. Especially about the world being convenient for him. And there's a reason for that, although I can't really tell now. Anyway I don't really blame you if you drop since I know this novel as so many problems but I still enjoy writing it so I can't really stop. Anyway thanks for the review😁😁😊
3yr
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Moshi~ Moshi~! Everyone. First of All, I would like to summarize it in just one line. "Great Book So Far" I know I know that there is only 3 chapters. And it's too early to judge but it seemed like good book that has potential. I sincerely hope that the Author won't drop it. Anyway, Nice book. Hope you read it. Sayonara~~!

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Nice Harem bro, from what i see with your novel story, your story was mixed of Novel My life as Tadano and Unconventional Delivery System, and i think its good , and i think you can make your story 50% in the MC original World, and 50% in another world for search of DC, Power and harem, its my opinion so dont take it seriously if it not help

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This is one of the story I like the most especially the world travel for quest. I recommend to read this story try at least 2-3 chapters(since currently there's 9) and decide to continue or not. And if you don't like it don't post 1 star since that's one of the reason most of the readers don't read the story.

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