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2021-02-26 17:16

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Spelloyal
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Normally I wouldn't do a review in chapter 4, but this fanfic has so many problems that I can't help it. Grammar is ok for me, but English is not my first language so I may be wrong, but the author's writing is kind of boring and monotonous. The stability of updates is the standard of the webnovel 1 chapter per day. It is in Story development that the problems really begin: 1) the mc gets an omnisystem, which is something I really hate (why the hell fanfic authors add "omni" to everything, is it really necessary to keep declaring that the mc system is absolute?). Well this is more my personal hatred missing, it is not a real problem, just a lack of creativity and maybe the author's laziness to give a name to the system but it doesn't harm the fanfic. 2) The real problem that almost makes me grieve besides being present in all the chapters that I have read so far is that instead of mc trying (or using the system to cheat in absurd ways) the damn world is made for the convenience of mc, with a pandemic killing most men making it easy to get a harem, and the world of sham entertainment where the mc can casually copy works from the previous world. Honestly, why the hell didn't you just say that mc created a famous manga like one piece? Is there really a need to create a convenient world where he can steal works from his past life? 3) Character Desing: None. The MC is nothing special, which is even acceptable, what really hurts is that in Chapter 3 the MC has already attracted the interest of two girls without even having time to present them to the readers correctly. 4) World Background: As I said before, made for the convenience of mc. I understand that it is a little early for a review, so I will at least read through the most recent chapters and do an updated review and give the fanfic a try before dropping.

QueenEsdeath
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