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2021-03-13 22:58

Final rating. Multiple transmigrated/reincarnated OCs and they just came out of nowhere and made the story worse than it was, cringe conversations with the mom who just doesnt notice anything different about him, the MC is NERFED HARD, MC just doesnt care about his mom or is just an idiot thats oblivious that she is doing something for him and had to leave but after she is gone the MC realizes something was weird and then just ignores it lol, his Mom is forcing the MC to go to school even though he only has 1year to live(that she knows) Like who in the world would force their kid to go to school that he has never been to just to die lol makes zero sense. Also the random OCs that show up that werent needed at all are terrible. Story could have been decent if it wasnt for the cringe conversations, the unnecessary bunch of transmigrated OCs that arent good at all, the MC being an idiot with his Mom, his Mom forcing him to attened school for the first time even though he is supposed to only hace 1year to live, way to Many OCs in a world that has thousands of characters to choose from..... all in all this story was a waste of time imo but if any of these reasons i listed appeals to you then maybe its for you idk

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NewAccount
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Kekw. This review is hardly legible, but I think your mains points are that the MC's relationship with his mom is weird and you don't like the OCs. The mom thing is seemingly self-explanatory but you clearly can't comprehend that Baldur =/= Balder. Of course their relationship is weird he isn't her son. And yes, she *does* realize that he's very different than normal but I mean what is she supposed to do about it? She also sends him to school so he can start to make a life for himself in advance before she heals him with the dhampir serum and so on. I think you're entirely in the wrong for this point and aren't actually reading the story. As for the OCs, that's a different matter and I can see what you mean. The intent of them is to provide a different view of Azum and a different perspective into the whole situation that Baldur is in. Baldur kinda took it too in-stride and has infinite resources to work with from the get-go. Plus, he's too utilitarian and frankly pretty boring as a protagonist. The other OC POV, Aldebaran, is a pretty interesting take on the scenario since he has 0 combat power and none of the resources Baldur has. Other than Alley, none of the others really get in the way so I don't see the issue tbh. Anyways TL;DR is that you're wrong and cringe

ghustV
ghustVLv5

I've not read this yet but. Some ppl do not like multiple MCS, I included. If this is then it really would be good to have a rant review about multiple MCS -cause it's not in the synopsis or the tags.

NewAccount:Kekw. This review is hardly legible, but I think your mains points are that the MC's relationship with his mom is weird and you don't like the OCs. The mom thing is seemingly self-explanatory but you clearly can't comprehend that Baldur =/= Balder. Of course their relationship is weird he isn't her son. And yes, she *does* realize that he's very different than normal but I mean what is she supposed to do about it? She also sends him to school so he can start to make a life for himself in advance before she heals him with the dhampir serum and so on. I think you're entirely in the wrong for this point and aren't actually reading the story. As for the OCs, that's a different matter and I can see what you mean. The intent of them is to provide a different view of Azum and a different perspective into the whole situation that Baldur is in. Baldur kinda took it too in-stride and has infinite resources to work with from the get-go. Plus, he's too utilitarian and frankly pretty boring as a protagonist. The other OC POV, Aldebaran, is a pretty interesting take on the scenario since he has 0 combat power and none of the resources Baldur has. Other than Alley, none of the others really get in the way so I don't see the issue tbh. Anyways TL;DR is that you're wrong and cringe
NewAccount
NewAccountLv1

hmm, it's hard to say. there's definitely only 1 MC. but, there are also parts where the story is told from other characters for a bit. like there is no character that gets even remotely the same amount of screentime as baldur. i think the original reviewer is more so complaining about the existence of other OCs. they dont really take over the show. or, at least not yet (though it probably will never happen)

ghustV:I've not read this yet but. Some ppl do not like multiple MCS, I included. If this is then it really would be good to have a rant review about multiple MCS -cause it's not in the synopsis or the tags.
Gilandcheese
GilandcheeseLv3

The thing is, a majority of us hate multiple reincarnates/transmigrates. OC is absolutely fine as long as they're not reincarnated or transmigrated. That's just a big turn off for most of us. Including me.

NewAccount:hmm, it's hard to say. there's definitely only 1 MC. but, there are also parts where the story is told from other characters for a bit. like there is no character that gets even remotely the same amount of screentime as baldur. i think the original reviewer is more so complaining about the existence of other OCs. they dont really take over the show. or, at least not yet (though it probably will never happen)
Gilandcheese
GilandcheeseLv3

Thanks for taking the bullet for us. Ur sacrifice will be remembered. So long, comrade.

NewAccount
NewAccountLv1

...why? is 2 the limit? seems needlessly arbitrary

Gilandcheese:The thing is, a majority of us hate multiple reincarnates/transmigrates. OC is absolutely fine as long as they're not reincarnated or transmigrated. That's just a big turn off for most of us. Including me.
Gilandcheese
GilandcheeseLv3

Wut?? What do u mean?

NewAccount:...why? is 2 the limit? seems needlessly arbitrary
ghustV
ghustVLv5

don't even bother to respond to him.

Gilandcheese:Wut?? What do u mean?
ghustV
ghustVLv5

This novel passes me the impression that it was firstly thought as of a original novel.With so much focus on the others reincarnated ocs, the apocalyptic past world of the archmagus, and the reincarnated ocs pov. Alas it's rarely that the 200 year old archmagus acts like he really is a old soul.

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