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QuinnWasLost
QuinnWasLostLv13yr
2021-03-12 18:02

Honest to god worst book ive ever read made me cringe everytime the MC spoke and i would lieterally rather kms then read this five stars. [img=fp]

Magus in Marvel

Pineappl3
4.5
28 Chs

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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Final rating. Multiple transmigrated/reincarnated OCs and they just came out of nowhere and made the story worse than it was, cringe conversations with the mom who just doesnt notice anything different about him, the MC is NERFED HARD, MC just doesnt care about his mom or is just an idiot thats oblivious that she is doing something for him and had to leave but after she is gone the MC realizes something was weird and then just ignores it lol, his Mom is forcing the MC to go to school even though he only has 1year to live(that she knows) Like who in the world would force their kid to go to school that he has never been to just to die lol makes zero sense. Also the random OCs that show up that werent needed at all are terrible. Story could have been decent if it wasnt for the cringe conversations, the unnecessary bunch of transmigrated OCs that arent good at all, the MC being an idiot with his Mom, his Mom forcing him to attened school for the first time even though he is supposed to only hace 1year to live, way to Many OCs in a world that has thousands of characters to choose from..... all in all this story was a waste of time imo but if any of these reasons i listed appeals to you then maybe its for you idk

3yr

Not_a_troll
Not_a_trollLv3

All right what's up gamers it's your boy fish here, author of the ever-so-popular series, "All Star", which has a combined 100 million views over all of its entries. Just trust me on that one. So what we're working with here is the flagship work of the famous gamer Phase_Unwanted_Pineapple. I am a full-time editor for this work that gets paid 30 USD per hour editing very thoroughly, so expect nothing but the utmost quality. I've read the first 3 chapters so far and I have to say that it's an absolutely exquisite work. The intense nuance of having a magus™ from another world (but also definitely not the Magus from actual Marvel) coming into the Marvel universe set in the movies is incredible. There's cute girls, there's cool action, there's an OP protagonist, and there's mystery. I think you fellow gamers get the idea, so give it a try. Now then, like this review of you think the author should change the thumbnail to this:

3yr
Sun_Son
Sun_SonLv1

Honestly, best AirBNB i've been to yet. It hits all the marks of a bed and breakfast. Stunning view, stocked minifridge, lovely workers who work with a great smile! Will remember this for years to come, and might write about my experience and have it published by Jeff Kinney and Andy Griffiths. It is honestly that good. If you needed a comparison, the BNB is like...having a childhood food after the longest food (thought of that from ratatouille) or a telltale and landmark book (Diary Of A Wimpy Kid comes to mind). If I had to post a complaint, it would simply be that sometimes there's this fat kid swimming in the pool, who releases this extreme odor, really awful. Apart from that, everything was what I was looking for. I give it 5 stars, and would have anyone travelling the world/looking for a detour, to give this pristine place a stop! You won't regret it (unless the fat kid is there). 5/5 stars, would stop by again!

3yr
NewAccount
NewAccountLv1

All right, here's a more serious review. Honestly, don't expect a lot of Marvel content here. This is about 80% OC and 20% Marvel; it's using the setting of the Marvel universe to create a unique story with its own characters. Of course Marvel characters pop up and so on but so far none of them are predominant. The writing is good enough, not perfect but you know. Give it a shot and see if you like it despite the plethora of different POVs.

3yr
Holypotato
HolypotatoLv4

it started very good and interesting. Grammer and writing quality is excelent. Flow of the story is very good its good deal above most things in webnovel. if updating pace continues like this I dont see why this novel doesnt become a hit. Good work author and any beta readers and editors

3yr
Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
GODKINGASH
GODKINGASHLv13

Looking forward to more ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️

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Tribute
TributeLv1

Beautiful grammer and a great story. This story wasn't boring to read as every chapter was great and exquisite in every possible way. Overall, this was a fine peace of work!

3yr
Amir_Blumenfeld
Amir_BlumenfeldLv4

this story was okay until author ruined it by adding a bunch of new characters that just took away from the story.

3yr
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