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FieryFeather
FieryFeatherLv54yr
2021-03-11 07:15

Kinda felt it was repeated. Similar stories have been expressed in other novels where The main character the dad comes and is super OP. Overall not bad but I wouldn’t recommend if you’ve been reading stories like that

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Divine_rod
Divine_rodLv4

Thank you *sigh*Chinese and young master's and ofc CEO

Unexplored_Tripura
Unexplored_TripuraLv11

Nice story

kuriosoth
kuriosothLv2

but...repeated cliché stories are not boring if they're written well..this one feels like it's been written by a child lol. the plots are childish and the writing skills too..and the plots seems chaotic . maybe it's the translator who messed it up..but regardless of however much he messes up..he can't just create that chaotic energy without the story being truly shi-.

Jawanda_Ruffin
Jawanda_RuffinLv14

Ok i

Alamin_Bello_8735
Alamin_Bello_8735Lv1

The author is too slow

Adebiyi_Hamdalat
Adebiyi_HamdalatLv1

very interesting and attention capturing novel with usage of good grammars

king_custer
king_custerLv1

so many xters r introduced (not in a bad tho) n hv all played their roles. overall gr8 novel i love it[img=recommend]

king_custer
king_custerLv1

stp badmouthx n write urs bro

kuriosoth:but...repeated cliché stories are not boring if they're written well..this one feels like it's been written by a child lol. the plots are childish and the writing skills too..and the plots seems chaotic . maybe it's the translator who messed it up..but regardless of however much he messes up..he can't just create that chaotic energy without the story being truly shi-.
Dhelustian_Rhudz
Dhelustian_RhudzLv3

same old story with different title..that's it!!!

Dennis_Kiyondi
Dennis_KiyondiLv1

good story but the writer is too slow

bev_wanjiku
bev_wanjikuLv11

so far so good I love it

DaoistW2fhs5
DaoistW2fhs5Lv1

best story ever

Akapo_Samuel_4073
Akapo_Samuel_4073Lv2

Try writing yours if you don't like the story then leave

1181_Raj_Mali
1181_Raj_MaliLv3

writer couldn't make full use of the plots potential

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