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Red_Venerable
Red_VenerableLv113yr
2021-10-07 10:40

Congratulations author. You managed to ruin "S" tier novel by having mc ntr'd and still simping for that woman. Now with the latest chapter(107) I am deffinetly dropping this novel. MC found out that she actually cheated on him,and still won't leave her. That's low.. how could you do this, to us. Readers. Who really loved your story. I don't know if you'll see this review author, or even if you will care about it... But I just wanted to say, I am very sad, and very dissapointed both with how you wasted perfect mc, and a perfect story.

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Narutoss5
Narutoss5Lv13

Thank you for taking that blunt damage for all of us. Don't mark the review as spoiler. It will help others.

Senaio
SenaioLv3

Brother thAnk you

johnny_collinet
johnny_collinetLv1

chap 85 je laisse tomber dommage pourtant sa commencer bien

Edgar_Junior
Edgar_JuniorLv4

Nem todo herói usa capa!

Rolyn_Almohallas
Rolyn_AlmohallasLv1

nice

Daoist_Reader_Void
Daoist_Reader_VoidLv10

you are a hero

KingDazzler
KingDazzlerLv10

I just love the way you wrote this review.....to us, readers.... c'mon....I feel your pain....some authors don't just care about our feelings.....💔💔💔

INeedMilk
INeedMilkLv5

SpankMyBeef
SpankMyBeefLv15

Thank you for the review, Now i know not to waste my time with this trash.

Sai_Swagath
Sai_SwagathLv10

waiting for chapter no.223 now!!!

Sai_Swagath
Sai_SwagathLv10

Better read the next chapters as well...

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Sage_Andrew
Sage_AndrewLv3

thanks for the warning i stepped back at the same time i was just going to add this to my library... you know it can break heart after hooked up with a story... i think the author must be a cuckold.

MJ_Dizon
MJ_DizonLv1

the story was good and suddenly becomes trash

Quetzalcotal
QuetzalcotalLv4

so , MC got NTR'ed . Thanks , it is borderline impossible reading this kind of scene for me.

John_j_7292
John_j_7292Lv12

I think author of this novel is sadist and he likes to see MC suffer.

John_j_7292
John_j_7292Lv12

I think author of this novel is sadist and he likes to see MC suffer.

Titus_ReavesT
Titus_ReavesTLv1

thank you ive finally gotten into reading and this is what you get after all the money spent. you are honored for this review thank you. and he probably still didn't get no pus$¥. like Charlie Wade!

Narutoss5
Narutoss5Lv13

Don't want the info of ntr as spoiler! 😀

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Zielius
ZieliusLv14

just an extra warning, this does NOT get better. I've skimmed the raws and Victoria also ends up going psycho as a result of a series of very convoluted, messy time travel shenanigans. she ends up 'cheating' on him but not really but also does (when Lauren goes missing and leaves with Jordan's brother to reunite with her father, Jordan believes that the Howard's have her captive so he agrees to marry lauren in order to gain info on her location, upon learning of their soon to be marriage a distraught Veronica seeks out Jordans brother and sleeps with him.... later we find out its actually just Jordan's alternate identity from when time travels back to the past.. so jordan ends up cucking himself and therefore getting front row seats to Victorias infedility. Naturally this causes him to be repulsed by her. This leads to a rift and eventually them splitting up, then..... emotionally wrecked she marries his uncle lol.... (whom she was previously comforted (not sexually) by during Jordans supposed death) Now she's become some superhuman with mind control abilities that has also become insane (Lauren is the only girl that remains faithful for those who are crazy enough to continue reading. oh and also some Swedish chick named Lota). All in all, don't read this garbage, it's not worth your time or money. Unless u enjoy subpar writing and an author who cannot write without just inserting convoluted, incredibly forced drama.

Migom_Doley
Migom_DoleyLv1

Please upload minimum 1 chapter in a day🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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