Item: Re:Asura
Rating: 1
Author: Spelloyal

SpelloyalLv123yr

2021-10-07 15:40

I honestly tried very hard to read this fanfic, but it's just too bad. I had found the premise interesting and was excited about the mc becoming a male version of Asuramaru, but in the end, after a few hours of forcing myself to read it I had to give up. The execution is terrible, the story takes centuries to start and starts with the mc already being incredibly OP. The amount of information dump is one I have never seen before, the mc takes 4 chapters making wishes and reading system status. Before even starting the story, the mc already has about 20 or 30 skills and it is impossible to follow them. The mc takes 11 chapters to finally go to the world of Re:Zero, but when he gets there the world is so different that outside it doesn't look like Re:Zero anymore. To make matters worse, the MC is some God of the Oni and just stepping into the world Ram falls in love with him. Other than that we have several other problems a little bit smaller, such as bad writing, the mc's garbage personality and so on.

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