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Evesty
EvestyLv44yr
2021-03-06 15:54

very good FF thoughtfull character progression not that op from our prespective and he do not just go and destroy things on the blue he thinks and plans about his future actions. We are in the ben 10 verse do not know why it is harry potter world in the volume some kind of foreshadowing?

Hitman's Multiverse Adventures

6Arkanos6
4.5
83 Chs

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TheAbsolution
TheAbsolutionLv4

one of the best fanfics ever extremely well designed plotline and characters not extremely op mc but a well thought powers really love this fanfic hope you keep it up author san

4yr

RedCommissar
RedCommissarLv10

It's really hard to come up with words to properly describe this book. So I'm just going to say that it simply is amazing and it is a proper Hitman novel. The protagonist doesn't go in guns blazing, instead sneaks into the location, takes out the photographer, uses that cover to get into the kitchens and systematically takes out the staff and ends it with him using the photographer as a cover to get close enough to his Target to assassinate them with explosives. To put it more simply I cannot wait for more chapters and I am looking forward to where the author takes this story. If the author is going to do any romance which I would personally love to see I don't know about other people or what your plan is this is just strictly a friendly suggestion. I think you should pick a girl from Akame ga kill so they can Bond over assassinations.

4yr
EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

Writing quality is really good but there are still some mistakes. Update I don’t know so 4* Story development. Started really good and interesting but then it all went to shit. Author jumps all over the place and contradicts himself. In one chapter the person is dead or moving on just to be included in the conversation few chapters later. Story becomes boring as hell as probably even the author didn’t know what to write about. All the good, funny and interesting aspects of the story were cut out (like family relationships) and just disregarded after killing Valdy. World background is nothing new. Chapter design. Was really good at the beginning but then just gotcut out and forgotten.

4yr
Darquesse
DarquesseLv6

This fanfic started out fairly well but then began to disappoint. It was a decent story, fairly cliche at some points, but that isn't completely bad. But then it came to the end of the first world. The author simply began summarizing character's life. This itself wasn't bad, it's the fact that this summary style continued after he had moved onto the next world. The chapters, with a few exceptions just became summaries, little to no interaction or conversation. Each paragraph just became "And then he went there and did that and got this" and then it moves on to the next thing. I would rate it 4 star for the first world, 3 star after that.

4yr
Lu_Ck
Lu_CkLv13

My head hurts Reading this the story is inconsistent it changes almost every chapter can you pls fix it and why is mc complaining about being weak and can't he just change the timeline before the cannon??

4yr
gojik46709
gojik46709Lv1

Great story!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr
naraiz_ryhall
naraiz_ryhallLv3

fast read.. quite a good one i say[img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

4yr
Kliemann
KliemannLv13

Underrated novel is underrated!

4yr
BLong
BLongLv12

Really like the story so far!!! keep it up! And don't rush through the story just to get to another world like so many other multiverse stories do. It really just ruins the whole reading experience.

4yr
Sheptshept
SheptsheptLv1

Una historia de hitman pero con un protagonista bipolar y un autor idiota que se olvida del nombre del protagonista la historia de por si no es sólida tiene muchos problemas de consistencia y capítulos muy cortos que no explican nada aunque hitman siempre fue del tipo frío el autor trata de mezclar al prota entre dos personalidades y no sabe como hacerlo lo que más molesta es que el prota se comporta como un niño pero recuerden que es un adulto en el cuerpo de un niño y con una supuesta personalidad de hitman bueno yo ya la deje de leer salu2

4yr
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