one of the best fanfics ever extremely well designed plotline and characters not extremely op mc but a well thought powers really love this fanfic hope you keep it up author san

Writing quality is really good but there are still some mistakes. Update I don’t know so 4* Story development. Started really good and interesting but then it all went to shit. Author jumps all over the place and contradicts himself. In one chapter the person is dead or moving on just to be included in the conversation few chapters later. Story becomes boring as hell as probably even the author didn’t know what to write about. All the good, funny and interesting aspects of the story were cut out (like family relationships) and just disregarded after killing Valdy. World background is nothing new. Chapter design. Was really good at the beginning but then just gotcut out and forgotten.

It's really hard to come up with words to properly describe this book. So I'm just going to say that it simply is amazing and it is a proper Hitman novel. The protagonist doesn't go in guns blazing, instead sneaks into the location, takes out the photographer, uses that cover to get into the kitchens and systematically takes out the staff and ends it with him using the photographer as a cover to get close enough to his Target to assassinate them with explosives. To put it more simply I cannot wait for more chapters and I am looking forward to where the author takes this story. If the author is going to do any romance which I would personally love to see I don't know about other people or what your plan is this is just strictly a friendly suggestion. I think you should pick a girl from Akame ga kill so they can Bond over assassinations.

This fanfic started out fairly well but then began to disappoint. It was a decent story, fairly cliche at some points, but that isn't completely bad. But then it came to the end of the first world. The author simply began summarizing character's life. This itself wasn't bad, it's the fact that this summary style continued after he had moved onto the next world. The chapters, with a few exceptions just became summaries, little to no interaction or conversation. Each paragraph just became "And then he went there and did that and got this" and then it moves on to the next thing. I would rate it 4 star for the first world, 3 star after that.

My head hurts Reading this the story is inconsistent it changes almost every chapter can you pls fix it and why is mc complaining about being weak and can't he just change the timeline before the cannon??

Great story!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Really like the story so far!!! keep it up! And don't rush through the story just to get to another world like so many other multiverse stories do. It really just ruins the whole reading experience.

Una historia de hitman pero con un protagonista bipolar y un autor idiota que se olvida del nombre del protagonista la historia de por si no es sólida tiene muchos problemas de consistencia y capítulos muy cortos que no explican nada aunque hitman siempre fue del tipo frío el autor trata de mezclar al prota entre dos personalidades y no sabe como hacerlo lo que más molesta es que el prota se comporta como un niño pero recuerden que es un adulto en el cuerpo de un niño y con una supuesta personalidad de hitman bueno yo ya la deje de leer salu2

Underrated novel is underrated!