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EnderPLLv64yr
2021-03-05 21:32

Writing quality is really good but there are still some mistakes. Update I don’t know so 4* Story development. Started really good and interesting but then it all went to shit. Author jumps all over the place and contradicts himself. In one chapter the person is dead or moving on just to be included in the conversation few chapters later. Story becomes boring as hell as probably even the author didn’t know what to write about. All the good, funny and interesting aspects of the story were cut out (like family relationships) and just disregarded after killing Valdy. World background is nothing new. Chapter design. Was really good at the beginning but then just gotcut out and forgotten.

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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Nice detailed review! Heads up for next time you write a review like this if you can put the stars you put for each category! Thank you and have a wonderful day

Lu_Ck
Lu_CkLv13

I don't understand why he complains about being to weak at the start of canon he can literally kill all wizard's with his ability/wishes.

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