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Verhygo
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2021-02-28 00:42

I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 8. (Since there wasn't more out yet.) Writing Quality: The only noticeable mistake was definitely caused by auto correct. It's good, especially if it's really the first book. Story Development: I don't usually like zombie stories, which makes this a pleasant surprise. The mystery keeps you hooked, then kicks the character development in and the action. I couldn't stop before I read everything.  Character Design: The main character is clever, without seeming like a know it all. A difficult balancing act, but it worked here. There wasn't much from the side characters, but it's still early. And what was there is making me more interested.  Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: Seems like Earth. But the nanotechnology based magic system is interesting. If you would even like to call that magic. I would thought.   The ability of the main character make for unlimited possibilities! Or near that. I wonder what's going to happen with that.  Summary: It's not much right now, in terms of chapters. But it's promising.  And you should check out the review that the writer wrote. It's amazing!

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