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Nosek
NosekLv144yr
2021-03-29 15:18

I really like the story, it's so unique and different But author please please if there will be any romance to make it slow and to be late romance since it will ruin the it considering eve character and that it's apocalypse . I stopped at chapter 14 to stock some chapters up so i don't know if you introduced some romance with ellie or not but hopefully you didn't Keep up the good work and the amazing story

Eve of the Doomsday

Garessta
4.9
164 Chs

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Garessta
GaresstaAuthor

*laughs in spoilers*

4yr
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Nosek
NosekLv14

I was going to bribe you with power stones to give me some spoilers but at the end i just continued to read the rest of the chapters . .. And now i regent it stopping at this critical point It's my personal opinion and has nothing to do with the quality of the story ( since it is already high quality even if i dislike something about it), but i really don't like the addition of victor, and him not controlling himself better and thinking about dominating eve is Erking me to no end, especially since i really hate this type of men in novels, altho i think part of it caused by his OCD, it does not make me feel better about him . I will continue reading to see what will happens, who knows maybe i will change my mind at the end of the arc ( don't think so 🌚) but for now my mind want him to disappear 🙂 Also congratulations for getting contracted 👌

Garessta:*laughs in spoilers*
4yr
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Garessta
GaresstaAuthor

Ah, I didn't mean to ask you to give me stones or anything. The spoilers I was laughin in are nothing that hadn't been published already. I am sure you will understand why I couldn't help myself when you get to it :>

Nosek:I was going to bribe you with power stones to give me some spoilers but at the end i just continued to read the rest of the chapters . .. And now i regent it stopping at this critical point It's my personal opinion and has nothing to do with the quality of the story ( since it is already high quality even if i dislike something about it), but i really don't like the addition of victor, and him not controlling himself better and thinking about dominating eve is Erking me to no end, especially since i really hate this type of men in novels, altho i think part of it caused by his OCD, it does not make me feel better about him . I will continue reading to see what will happens, who knows maybe i will change my mind at the end of the arc ( don't think so 🌚) but for now my mind want him to disappear 🙂 Also congratulations for getting contracted 👌
4yr
1
Nosek
NosekLv14

Yup yup i knew that that's why i continued reading 👌 I heard that the great evil author GARESSTA is hard to please, i thought that i need to pay 50k power stones and my first born to get spoilers, but apparently i just needed to continue reading 🌚😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Garessta:Ah, I didn't mean to ask you to give me stones or anything. The spoilers I was laughin in are nothing that hadn't been published already. I am sure you will understand why I couldn't help myself when you get to it :>
4yr
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I do need reviews. And power stones. Wanna know why? I have a dream. That one day, every author on this site will control their OWN writing. A site of the TRULY free, dammit. A nation of IDEAS, not copy-pasting. Ruled by TALENT, not corporates. Where the law changes to suit the individual, not the other way around. Where money and justice are back where they belong: in the hands of the writers! Where every man is free to think -- to write -- for himself! Fuck all these face-slapping MC and endless harems. Fuck this 24/7 spew of the same asspulling bullshit. Fuck the readers who would read whatever is placed in front of them! Fuck all of it! We need to the slate clean. BURN IT DOWN! The weak will be purged, and the strongest will thrive - free to live as we see fit, we will make writing GREAT AGAIN!

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Interesting characters, world setting, and overall plot. While the writing is by no means flawless, it is at a much higher bar than the average original work on the site, and it grows and develops as the author continues to get more and more chapters under their belt. You can really see just how much growth the author has if you also take a peek at their other work, though this one is certainly worth reading as well, if you've already gotten to this point in the reviews I'm sure you've already seen the synopsis to gauge whether the setting is of interest to you or not. As a fellow author in this novel's discord server, I've had the privilege of helping as an idea soundboard for the upcoming story arc, and I can happily say that active readers have several things to look forward to, I'll resist the urge to give any spoilers >:3

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skeleton_key
skeleton_keyLv15

Well I found this book after its completion, hence I can’t judge about the update stability. Still, I give it a 5 because this story deserves to be noted 5 overall. Writing is excellent. Story was completed when I found it. I’m around chapter 101 and the story developped quite well in that number of chapters. I love the characters, because they feel humans. Never expected the romantic turn of the story but it made sense that it happened when it did. And they are well matched, I think. The world is described well enough to be immersed in it. All in all, it is a very good short story so far. Let’s see how it ends !

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KarenJ_777
KarenJ_777Lv15

I really enjoy this story and the creative Apocalypse imagined by this author! The characters are Great! I love that everyone gets a Superpower after the apocalypse and that people can upgrade themselves like a computer! I wish i could to that too! I need more Memory and and Upgrade myself!! 😁😁

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It's like Zombie Sister Strategy but a thousand times better. Extraordinary writing, story, and characters! This author is the best and so are her stories. Don't miss out on this book!

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YoanRoturier
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Well written with a well depicted main character. The story develops at just the right pace, not too fast not too long, it's quite enjoyable. I like the nanite idea and am eager to see what more they have in store. Grammar issues are close to non-existent, making the reading flow smooth, unlike a lot of other novels on the website. All in all good job.

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Nancy_Jim
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Reveal spoiler

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The_divine_oracle
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I have read quite a few zombie novels and the way it starts is generally the same except for this book. It shows the author's creativity and forethought. Also, there are clear origins for the system. It is not some kind of magic and well explained. The two characters that have been introduced are interesting and properly portrayed. The author does a good job in portraying the apocalyptic world giving. It felt like getting a tour of that world. Keep up the good work. :D

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