The story is good, but what infuriates me is the idiocy of the MC. He is an absolute retard, ignoring his safety for some quick strength. Why would he draw Naruto of all things? He didn't even try to draw anything else. The masses starved of entertainment would eat up any cliche story like it was a gold mine. In Naruto, after a couple dozen chapters of plot, there are already secrets that would get him killed. Yet he doesn't care. He doesn't care about how many relationships he will burn and how many issues would arise because of what he included in his comic. If a character, be it classmate or someone else, isn't included in the story, it is screaming to their face that they will be dead or irrelevant in the story. This wouldn't be an issue, if he didn't focus so much on the people that DO survive. And what I don't understand is how people react to the uchiha massacre??? Like it is already a political move on the agenda, so they wouldn't just stand calmly. And if he excluded it from the story, he would have changed the plot unrecognisably. I don't like how the author completely ignores this and just goes with it. Yes, it might be just some sketches of a child, but it has huge implications. Besides all that, he should have known better than to talk about sensitive subjects such as the Uchiha incident. This, along with flawed background logic is why I can only give WB 2 stars. About the characters. They are greatly flawed, there appears to be almost no change in the current personalities of the characters and when they go through war, loss, hardship, suffering, death and grief. You might say that they are childish but are still trained to act mature, but it still doesn't mean much. These are kids who have only experienced peace and prosperity and know nothing of the 'real' world. This is why CD also gets 2 stars. About the story. It is a bit better, but not deserving of 4 stars. I am only on chapter 21, so I can't say much, but from what I have seen, it is basic at most. There is nothing new, nothing exciting, only the same old group of perfect kids with superpowers. (Before you ask, I am aware that this is a translation, so most of the critique goes to the original author). Webnovel has a dumpsterfire of a rating system, so the end result came out as 3.2 stars.
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LIKEI just read a couple of reviews and my evaluation dropped even further. HE GAVE A DEVIL FRUIT TO HIS FRIENDS? Excuse me, but this is pure lunacy. Devil fruits should be extremely expensive (if they are not, the author doesn't know anything about One Piece) and he spent the points he had on them? WHAT? With those points, he could have done so much more, yet he wastes them like this?
