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2022-07-14 01:04

What should I say? This Kakashi just doesn't seem Kakashi at this point. He is a fool and made Orochimaru OP. I think the author is trying to make Orochimaru the main villain. I liked this fanfic due to it's intense research and long development, but the development turned really long. Everyone just praises him and depend on him too much. He taught Chidori to Madara. He really didn't have the intelligence to prevent butterfly effect. Even Minato, who knew Naruto was his son and clearly didn't know about it, which meant he and Kushina died sealed away their memories to prevent butterfly effect. I rated Adult Kakashi and Minato at somewhat similar intelligence but he made Kakashi just plain stupid. The translater does good job at translating this but Chinese fanfics make me loose my braincells due to stupid characters. All I can say, good job.

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