I loved the way you describe the characters without mentioning their appearance. You present them showing their behavior and thoughts, their actions. The way you express yourself is recognizable, highlighting a very good language. The settings and the way the events unfold is remarkable, not to mention that it grabs the reader almost immediately. A great work, from a great author. 9/10
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