I have just started reading your story, and I feel that it has potential ... I am not going to lie to you, there are things to improve, but it is very good and interesting... Thank you for sharing your work, I hope I can continue enjoying it. And, as a thank you for sharing your work, I see myself in the need to return such a kind gesture, inviting you to read my story, hoping that it can entertain you... (https://***.webnovel.com/book/knights-and-dragons_19497454105471705) No more to say, I say goodbye. I wish you a good week, and I send you a psychological hug. My name is H, and remember: my intentions are not good... :)

I loved the way you describe the characters without mentioning their appearance. You present them showing their behavior and thoughts, their actions. The way you express yourself is recognizable, highlighting a very good language. The settings and the way the events unfold is remarkable, not to mention that it grabs the reader almost immediately. A great work, from a great author. 9/10

Is incredible. Your way of narrating is very good, the dialogues of the characters are fun and their way of expressing themselves is interesting, very typical of this type of narration. Even if it's just the prologue, I already loved it. I really feel like in a pirate story, although I don't know if that was your intention, but I like it. I'm anxious to know what will happen to Shane and Bo.

I did the elbow touch, and it worked for me

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I loved. The beginning is incredible.