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BrianG9677
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2021-06-02 06:10

Dropped chapter 2 due to author rushing everything She has been in the body less than half aday read a single book asked couple questions and is already trying to cultivate 1 author calls cultivation spiritualists 2 hasn't given details of mcs past before cultivation idiocy 3 hasn't given mc opportunity to know about financial situation of family 4 hasn't given mc opportunity to adapt to new life 5 mc hasn't even met the grandfather etc

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BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

At least way 5 to 10 chapters before first attempt This gives opportunity for readers to know of mcs abilities that she brought over Gives opportunity to show her personality before becoming powerful or influential Gives the passing opportunity of mc meeting ml Gives depth to her character and reasoning to get powerful

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Wait not way

Riya_San
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Don't try to reason with novels... they are not made of logic... just imagination๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ But I can understand your thoughts... because even I was like that at the beginning... gradually accepting everything for time pass...

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